Haiku- Icy Blankets

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ice snow is falling on sweet frozen spring flowers . . . icy blankets melt ___________________________ April 15, 2018 Poetry/Haiku/icy blankets Copyright Protected, ID 18-1013-200-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym Written for the contest, Haiku(theme nature) sponsor, Mick Talbot Third place

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Susan Gentry

Date: 4/18/2018 11:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this timely haiku.

Roy Pett

Date: 4/18/2018 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win BW, nature can be cruel at times, well written Haiku. :))

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 4/18/2018 3:19:00 AM

Congratulaions on your win, Constance.

Jean Murray

Date: 4/17/2018 1:53:00 PM

Wonderful description of flowers frozen Constance. Congratulations.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/17/2018 11:52:00 AM

Melt, melt ,melt please! Lovely Haiku, and that picture is amazing. Congratulations dear poetess xomo!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/17/2018 10:43:00 AM

Describes this season for sure! Congrats!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/17/2018 9:14:00 AM

Dropping back to say many congrats Constance:-) hugs Jan xx

L. J. Carber

Date: 4/17/2018 9:06:00 AM

Congrats Broken Wings--while the photo is perfect for the poem, it is redundant as you created the image so well, so fully formed in only 3 lines-- a true haiku!