Haiku -Spring Cherries

cherry blossom He licks fresh sweetness from her lips

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eric boddie

Date: 5/19/2017 9:10:00 AM

my oh my....im that type of guy....charmaine, you naughty girl....the tip of your pen has to be a pearl....because all you produce is gems....you have so many fans and i am proud to be one of them....i Love this....;)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/16/2017 6:37:00 PM

I haven't like the haiku form until lately. It felt confined. You in this one and another you wrote have helped open my mind.

niall fulham

Date: 5/16/2017 3:40:00 PM

Hi Charmaine , very romantic , fresh and sweet :))

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 5/16/2017 3:09:00 PM

Wow, what Tim said. What a treat for us all who read you. A Fav! Lots Of Love Always, armand.

Chris Green

Date: 5/16/2017 3:07:00 PM

Wow, this was definitely warm and so seductive. This little Haiku sure does whisper loudly. Really nice my sweet friend.

JAN ALLISON

Date: 5/16/2017 3:03:00 PM

beautiful sensual and romantic I love it Charma!:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/16/2017 2:55:00 PM

Wow...very romantic..not what I was expecting to see...sweet indeed Charmaine