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Haiku -Spring Cherries

cherry blossom He licks fresh sweetness from her lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 5/19/2017 9:10:00 AM
my oh that type of guy....charmaine, you naughty girl....the tip of your pen has to be a pearl....because all you produce is have so many fans and i am proud to be one of them....i Love this....;)
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Date: 5/18/2017 8:18:00 PM
When I read the title, I wondered how there could be spring cherries (unless imported from somewhere else). Then, I remembered that here, cherries can get ripe enough about a day or two before summer. Nvm that, I'm rambling lol. This is a deliciously romantic haiku. And, it only took 12 syllables.
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Date: 5/16/2017 6:37:00 PM
I haven't like the haiku form until lately. It felt confined. You in this one and another you wrote have helped open my mind.
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Date: 5/16/2017 3:40:00 PM
Hi Charmaine , very romantic , fresh and sweet :))
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Date: 5/16/2017 3:09:00 PM
Wow, what Tim said. What a treat for us all who read you. A Fav! Lots Of Love Always, armand.
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Date: 5/16/2017 3:07:00 PM
Wow, this was definitely warm and so seductive. This little Haiku sure does whisper loudly. Really nice my sweet friend.
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Date: 5/16/2017 3:03:00 PM
beautiful sensual and romantic I love it Charma!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/16/2017 2:55:00 PM
Wow...very romantic..not what I was expecting to see...sweet indeed Charmaine
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