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Haiku -Spring Cherries 

cherry blossom
He licks fresh sweetness
from her lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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eric boddie
Date: 5/19/2017 9:10:00 AM
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my oh my....im that type of guy....charmaine, you naughty girl....the tip of your pen has to be a pearl....because all you produce is gems....you have so many fans and i am proud to be one of them....i Love this....;)
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Chris D. Aechtner
Date: 5/18/2017 8:18:00 PM
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When I read the title, I wondered how there could be spring cherries (unless imported from somewhere else). Then, I remembered that here, cherries can get ripe enough about a day or two before summer. Nvm that, I'm rambling lol. This is a deliciously romantic haiku. And, it only took 12 syllables.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/16/2017 6:37:00 PM
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I haven't like the haiku form until lately. It felt confined. You in this one and another you wrote have helped open my mind.
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niall fulham
Date: 5/16/2017 3:40:00 PM
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Hi Charmaine , very romantic , fresh and sweet :))
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 5/16/2017 3:09:00 PM
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Wow, what Tim said. What a treat for us all who read you. A Fav! Lots Of Love Always, armand.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/16/2017 3:07:00 PM
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Wow, this was definitely warm and so seductive. This little Haiku sure does whisper loudly. Really nice my sweet friend.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/16/2017 3:03:00 PM
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beautiful sensual and romantic I love it Charma!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/16/2017 2:55:00 PM
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Wow...very romantic..not what I was expecting to see...sweet indeed Charmaine
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