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Haiku - Tree

beneath a green veil willow branches hide a stone- spider webs glisten ____________________________ August 19, 2019 Poetry/Haiku/Tree Copyright Protected, ID 19-1174-413-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Tree Themed Haiku sponsor, Tania Kitchen First Place

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 8/27/2019 4:41:00 PM

Great Win Dear heart!

Lu Loo

Date: 8/25/2019 12:37:00 PM

beautiful, congrats sweet Dear Heart :)-luloo

Barry Stebbings

Date: 8/23/2019 1:47:00 PM

Congratulations Dear Heart on your top place with this Haiku.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/23/2019 7:09:00 AM

Congratulations, Constance on your first position win.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2019 11:37:00 PM

Congratulations my dear friend. Hugs Eve

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/22/2019 9:11:00 PM

Dear Heart, it's a pleasure to return with congratulations for your excellent win with your beautifully poignant haiku. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2019 6:09:00 PM

this is very lovely , Dear heart. It feels "haiku" too!!! Congrats and thanks for my win in your contest.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/22/2019 2:27:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Dear Heart! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/22/2019 2:21:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Constance. Willow trees stole the show.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/22/2019 11:54:00 AM

Beautiful, wondrous haiku! Heartiest congratulations on your win, Constance:-)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2019 10:21:00 AM

such beautiful imagery Constance many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/22/2019 8:40:00 AM

Pretty imagery! Congratulations, Constance!

John Gondolf

Date: 8/22/2019 8:13:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Constance, I never thought of the willow branches as being a green veil. Congrats on your win. Hugs, John

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 8/22/2019 7:17:00 AM

Golden hearts glisten) My best congrats to winner of winners. Perfect haiku.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/22/2019 7:08:00 AM

A lovely hiaku...congrats on your first place.

John Lawless

Date: 8/22/2019 6:31:00 AM

Beautifully done ..... a mystery within a hidden stone.....buried...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/22/2019 6:12:00 AM

- A wonderful first place, D.H. - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/22/2019 5:00:00 AM

Congratulations Constance with your first place win, love your beautiful haiku with great imagery!

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 8/19/2019 9:55:00 PM

Beautiful, I have a willow near my pond, I will look for that stone every time I am near it.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/19/2019 7:04:00 PM

Oh a beautifully expressed haiku, Dear Heart. Love your last line for a vivid finish. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2019 5:45:00 PM

- Lovely haiku, D.H. ... especially the last line ... I admire the spider web - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Barry Stebbings

Date: 8/19/2019 5:19:00 PM

Nicely pictured, Dear Heart. Good luck in the contest. // Barry