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Haiku - Storm

tempest through the night angry breakers lashed the shore ~ calm sea at sunrise Wind and water; powerful forces of Nature were the inspiration for this Haiku. I imagined spending the night in a lighthouse on a cliff's edge, watching the scene unfold. August 3, 2020 Traditional Haiku -Nature Themed Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Christopher Grieves

Date: 9/27/2020 5:40:00 AM

I love the lighthouse imagery, very nice haiku.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 8/16/2020 3:57:00 AM

Nature in movement...beauty in poert' text,,, salute companion of poetry, alkas

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/4/2020 4:41:00 PM

Excellent Jenna, Good luck Pangie xxxxx

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/5/2020 6:44:00 AM

Thank you SOooo much, Pangie.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/4/2020 12:38:00 PM

- Three powerful lines that say a lot, Jenna :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/5/2020 6:43:00 AM

Thank you ever so much, Anne-Lise. Hugs back to you, too.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/4/2020 6:05:00 AM

a perfect poem for today as we have stormy conditions and very strong winds:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/4/2020 8:52:00 AM

Careful of those winds, Jan. Thanks for taking time to leave me your comments.

John Gondolf

Date: 8/4/2020 5:45:00 AM

Sometimes in the darkness it seems that the storm will never end but the morning sun always lights the new day. May the sun always shine brightly upon your day, Jenna. Hugs, John

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/4/2020 8:51:00 AM

It's the truth, John. Your sentiments are greatly appreciated. Thank you.

Mark Koplin

Date: 8/4/2020 3:32:00 AM

Sometimes our storms seem so long but they always end and the sun comes back out.

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/4/2020 8:50:00 AM

That's a really good positive thought to hold on to, Mark. Thanks!

John Watt

Date: 8/3/2020 4:54:00 PM

A nice ending to a long, stormy night. I hope that's a metaphor for this year's pandemic, Jenna. Nice haiku with strong imagery ~ John

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/4/2020 3:30:00 AM

Let's hope one day soon, we'll no longer have reason to fear this virus. Thank you for having a positive outlook after reading my poem.