Parrotfish

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~ temple of coral... parrotfish weave sun columns - the dance... prismatic ~

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/22/2018 7:58:00 PM

Wonderful! Let's the reader's imagination take over, as top-notch (haiku) poetry should. Perfect. Best wishes, Gershon

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/23/2018 6:47:00 AM

Thank you so much, Gershon - so pleased you liked it! It did not place, however, (I forgot to put the date on it, so it was DQ'd). Blessings, friend! :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2018 4:19:00 AM

- Beautifully described, Gregory ... colorful fish - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/20/2018 10:54:00 PM

Thank you very much, Anne-Lise - blessings to you, friend! :-) <3

Jan Allison

Date: 4/18/2018 8:50:00 AM

beautiful imagery Greg, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/19/2018 2:46:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Jan - much appreciated! :-) <3

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/18/2018 8:21:00 AM

Lovely! I almost did one on parrot fish too ;) (I went for muskellunge) My best to you! xomo <3

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/19/2018 2:41:00 AM

Ooh, muskellunge - I will have to read it, Mo - best of luck in the contest, Dear friend! :-) <3