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Parrotfish

~   temple of coral...

                    parrotfish weave sun columns -

                                        the dance... prismatic   ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
April 22, 2018 at 7:58 PM
Wonderful! Let's the reader's imagination take over, as top-notch (haiku) poetry should. Perfect. Best wishes, Gershon
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April 23, 2018 at 6:47 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon - so pleased you liked it! It did not place, however, (I forgot to put the date on it, so it was DQ'd). Blessings, friend! :-)
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April 19, 2018 at 4:19 AM
- Beautifully described, Gregory ... colorful fish - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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April 20, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise - blessings to you, friend! :-) <3
Allison Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 8:50 AM
beautiful imagery Greg, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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April 19, 2018 at 2:46 AM
Thank you so very much, Jan - much appreciated! :-) <3
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April 18, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Lovely! I almost did one on parrot fish too ;) (I went for muskellunge) My best to you! xomo <3
Barden Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 2:41 AM
Ooh, muskellunge - I will have to read it, Mo - best of luck in the contest, Dear friend! :-) <3
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