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beneath ocean waves a boat lays ever caressed- rainbow fish explore _______________________________ January 27, 2019 Poetry/Monoku/ocean waves Copyright Protected, ID 19-1108-632-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Ocean Waves Haiku sponsor, Tania Kitchin Third Place

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Date: 1/30/2019 6:41:00 PM
BAck with my congrats. HOpefully I will get my clerihew contest judged this weekend. Oh my, so much to do. Is it as cold there as it is in my homestate, Iowa? I heard it was minus 20's!!
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Date: 1/30/2019 6:48:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the congrats, anxious to see where I place in your Clerihew contest, or if I place, lol. It is much worse that minus 20 Andrea, sometimes minus 35 with the wind and we have so much snow, never experienced a winter like this, I have been hibernating, even missing dance class, so you know it must be bad ~
Date: 1/29/2019 8:08:00 AM
- I'm back with congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/30/2019 6:31:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the congratulations and hugs ~
Date: 1/28/2019 7:45:00 PM
You make it sound like a beautiful ending, Constance.
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Date: 1/29/2019 7:06:00 AM
Line, thanks for visiting and for the nice comment ~
Date: 1/28/2019 7:38:00 PM
Lovely Haiku, makes me think about exploring that ship with the fish, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 1/29/2019 7:06:00 AM
Tania, thanks for the contest and the inspiration for me to write this poem ~
Date: 1/28/2019 4:11:00 AM
- A picture of great natural forces ... excellent written, D.H. :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:23:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you for visiting with the excellent ~
Date: 1/27/2019 4:49:00 PM
Scary, Constance, but love the poetry..
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:23:00 AM
Harry, thanks for visiting with the love ~
Date: 1/27/2019 3:12:00 PM
very nicely done. This is one I better hurry to do!!
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:24:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment ~
Date: 1/27/2019 12:24:00 PM
Lovely image D.H. , brought images of ships found by explorers under the ocean, fish darting everywhere.
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:24:00 AM
Tom, thanks for visiting and for that nice comment ~
Date: 1/27/2019 12:14:00 PM
I'm not usually a haiku fan, but I'm a fan of this one!
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:25:00 AM
Sun, thank you for the compliment ~
Date: 1/27/2019 11:54:00 AM
that was one stunning picture
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Date: 1/27/2019 12:14:00 PM
Sand, thanks for the visit and the stunning !
Date: 1/27/2019 11:21:00 AM
Wow! A haven for the fish. A sad loss.
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Date: 1/27/2019 11:29:00 AM
Kim, thanks for visiting, yes nature can be beautiful and cruel ~

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