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Awarded:  SECOND PLACE
Rick Parise
Contest: One Haiku 
 

A leaf touches down
Rippling the flames of autumn
Burning on the lake

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/29/2014 3:07:00 PM
Elaine,, My expression, WOW, for a haiku... Enjoyed the imagery......... XOX............... Linda
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Date: 7/1/2011 11:03:00 AM
congrats on the win!!
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:38:00 PM
congrats on your big win in the contest, this paints a blazing image of autumn, very good haiku...
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Date: 6/27/2011 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^RICK's "One Haiku" contest Lainie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 11:17:00 AM
Magnificent, Lainie. Congrats on your big win! Health issues are preventing me from spending much time online. Perhaps after the physical therapy I will be able to read and comment more. Thanks for reading my entry. I actually did see an "outcast" bird on the beach and somehow related to its feelings. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 6/26/2011 12:34:00 AM
Awesome imagery!!! Congrats Elaine on your win.. a beautiful picture you painted with this. Love, gautami
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Date: 6/25/2011 5:25:00 PM
Creative work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 6/24/2011 10:41:00 PM
Very striking imagery you have here, Lainie-- really enjoyed how you depicted autumn here :) Super congrats on your wonderful win :D and thank you as well for your encouraging comments in mine :D
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Date: 6/24/2011 10:12:00 PM
last line was a spark.. congrats on you high win, elaine! :) huggs!
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:58:00 PM
ooooh, how descriptive of the fall, Elaine. Excellent winner!!
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Date: 6/24/2011 6:36:00 PM
Congrats Laine on a beautiful win in the contest with this beautiful picture painted in words my friend.. enjoy.. luv..
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Date: 10/1/2009 12:06:00 AM
Into my favourites as well Elaine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 9/24/2009 7:42:00 AM
Gorgeous haiku! Thanks sweet Lainie for your thoughtful congrats on my feature. Hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 9/21/2009 8:38:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments today Elaine.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/20/2009 2:43:00 PM
A beautiful "reflection" of Autumn, Lainie. Lovely haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/18/2009 12:08:00 AM
Like the colourful contrasts and play on words in L2/3 Elaine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and encouragment to my poetry
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Date: 9/17/2009 2:28:00 PM
Very nice image, Elaine. Smiling, Dane Ann
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Date: 9/17/2009 10:37:00 AM
hmm, Autumn is at it again... thanks for sharing this, it's awesome
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Date: 9/16/2009 5:31:00 AM
Poised, very well penned. Thx for commenting. All the best.
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Date: 9/16/2009 2:52:00 AM
A wonderful Haiku Elaine..keep up the great work.. Farah
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Date: 9/16/2009 1:18:00 AM
Beautifully written Haiku. I can see the scene. Keep writing. Sara. P.S. Thanks for the comments on my poem about dimwit poet contest. A man on here called john loving iii wrote a poem about me and wanted to know my middle name that is what that is about.
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Date: 9/16/2009 12:08:00 AM
Thanks for your welcome comments today Elaine.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/15/2009 7:10:00 AM
You have ceated such beautiful, vivid images in this wonderful Haiku, Lainie! I can see it and it is a lovely sight to see! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/15/2009 12:09:00 AM
Love the imagery of L2 Elaine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 9/14/2009 3:29:00 PM
a beautiful picture!
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