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Haiku - Hurricane Bashes Beach

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palms yield to harsh wind dark clouds fill tropical sky... thatched fronds blanket sand Date written: March 15, 2019 Contest: Writing Challenge 2, March 2019 - Haiku Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Jack Horne
Date: 10/23/2019 8:15:00 AM
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oh, scary - so glad to see this was a winner
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 4/13/2019 1:14:00 PM
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Congratulations with this win. Well done. Amazing job summing up the terrors of those storms. You proved that less is more. Wonderful!
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 3/31/2019 5:25:00 AM
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A bad hair day for nature! Love how you capture the storm. Well done. Hope all is well...x
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/24/2019 4:34:00 AM
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A beautiful descriptive image, Carolyn, even though I'd rather visit these tropical places when the weather is calm and warm! Belated congrats on your win. Hugs // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2019 11:07:00 AM
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Carolyn, congratulations on your win in my contest with this fine haiku and I love the image too ~
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/18/2019 4:34:00 AM
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Back with congratulations Carolyn. Tom.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 3/17/2019 7:49:00 PM
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Well written, Carolyn, good imagery. A hurricane, nature's unleashed fury! Congratulations!
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2019 7:18:00 PM
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Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/17/2019 6:35:00 PM
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I agree with Tania. GREAT imagery, CArolyn. Congrats for your win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/17/2019 3:33:00 PM
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Awesome imagery, congratulations on your win!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2019 3:16:00 PM
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- The powers of nature ... lovely written, Carolyn :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 3/16/2019 2:30:00 AM
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poem, so nicely matching the photograph. Really impressive.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/15/2019 4:53:00 PM
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good imagery Carolyn, it has the feel of traditional haiku with a turn at the last line from life to fallen
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/15/2019 2:52:00 PM
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Who could write a better caption for the photo? Good luck! Aloha! Rico
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Alexis Y.
Date: 3/15/2019 12:49:00 PM
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WoW! Carolyn, You created such a powerful image with words. I enjoyed the read. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2019 7:10:00 AM
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I didn't need the picture with your fabulous imagery Carolyn , excellent haiku:-) hugs jan xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/15/2019 11:10:00 AM
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Thanks, Jan. I'll check your page.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/15/2019 6:08:00 AM
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Menacing image Carolyn, the power of mother nature. Good luck. Tom.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/15/2019 6:55:00 AM
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Thanks for reading, Tom!

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