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ruby-rose throated hummingbird garden jewel . . . loud metallic trills ____________________________ August 16, 2018 Poetry/Haiku/Hummingbird Copyright Protected, ID 18-1052-539-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Hummingbird Haiku sponsor, Tania Kitchin Second Place

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Date: 8/23/2018 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. So well done, Dear Heart-Broken Wings
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Date: 8/21/2018 1:31:00 PM
CONGRATS to win on this wonderful poem. Love.
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Date: 8/21/2018 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win. Beautiful haiku!
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Date: 8/20/2018 4:26:00 AM
Excellent write.Congrats on your well deserved win,great poet.
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Date: 8/19/2018 1:48:00 AM
Congratulations dear heart - see we both chose the ruby as our favourite.
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Date: 8/18/2018 6:55:00 PM
Well done. Congrats.
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Date: 8/18/2018 10:34:00 AM
Congrats on your silver medal win, Dear Heart.
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Date: 8/18/2018 10:24:00 AM
I would love to hear one trill, Constance. I don't know if I have heard it! BIG congrats for your awesome win.
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Date: 8/18/2018 10:12:00 AM
wow, beautiful
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Date: 8/18/2018 10:05:00 AM
This is lovely, Constance ! Congrats on your high placement !!
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Date: 8/18/2018 9:34:00 AM
How wonderful, Constance! Congrats on a super haiku and a super win.
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Date: 8/18/2018 8:34:00 AM
Lovely piece Constance! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Date: 8/18/2018 5:27:00 AM
A beautiful haiku. It took me a few reads, but is this about those metal garden wind spinners?
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Date: 8/18/2018 5:19:00 AM
Beautifully written haiku congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Date: 8/17/2018 6:47:00 AM
Very, very nice-- a true haiku!
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Date: 8/16/2018 6:26:00 PM
So descriptive of natural beauty.
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Date: 8/16/2018 5:02:00 PM
So beautiful!
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Date: 8/16/2018 10:47:00 AM
robots ain't never gonna' be nowhere near like'a actual humming haiku
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