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Haiku - 18

moon low in the east orange fireball crawls skyward sparse clouds glow ablaze __________________________

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Karen Croft

Date: 10/26/2018 7:26:00 PM

Love this. Congrats

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/22/2018 4:58:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Rick.

L. J. Carber

Date: 10/19/2018 10:18:00 AM

Very nice! A true haiku-- congrats on your win in Brian's contest, Rick

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/18/2018 7:14:00 PM

Nicely done, Rick - I love this one - congratulations on your win in Brian's contest - blessings, and "write on", my friend! :-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2013 10:58:00 AM

This is descriptive of a sunset or two that I have experienced..Congrats on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2013 11:49:00 PM

glowingly beautiful, Rick. Long time no see, how are you?

Donna Jones

Date: 7/22/2013 1:01:00 PM

Beautiful...congratulations on your win

Kash Poet

Date: 7/22/2013 12:03:00 PM

Congrats Rick!Beautiful imagery!

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/22/2013 6:55:00 AM

Rick congrats on this great haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2013 1:17:00 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality Rick !! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 8:15:00 PM

Rick :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA**

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2011 2:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Any Haiku Will Do" ^Rick. Love, Carol

Eiken Laan

Date: 9/18/2011 1:26:00 PM

Rick A fine haiku, love the colours in this, magic.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/18/2011 11:17:00 AM

great description of sunrise - 2nd line my favorite, though the end really completes the picture. congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2011 9:29:00 AM

CONGRATS RICK ON A BIG WIN WITH GRAND HAIKU WORDS MY FRIEND..LUV..

David Williams

Date: 9/18/2011 6:19:00 AM

Rick congrats on your win..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2011 3:52:00 AM

Rick,,,.Congratulations on your Haiku win, ;-). Thank you so much for entering and sharing your poem.Thanks for supporting my contest,, God bless,... LINDA