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stream swells as it rains ants float on curled leaf life boats frogs jump in to bathe

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Date: 8/2/2019 8:37:00 AM
There isareal art to mastering a short form. You have certainly found it.
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Warren Doll
Date: 8/5/2019 11:15:00 AM
Richard, thanks so much! Best Wishes~ Warren
Date: 7/7/2019 4:29:00 PM
Enjoyed this view you penned for us to imagine in our heads.
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Warren Doll
Date: 7/15/2019 10:29:00 AM
Charmaine, glad that you enjoyed it and thanks for your visit~ Warren
Date: 7/6/2019 6:29:00 PM
I enjoyed this little picture you created.
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Warren Doll
Date: 7/15/2019 10:26:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I'm very glad that you enjoyed it. All the best~ Warren
Date: 5/19/2019 9:43:00 AM
This is great and with the detail of the curled leaves too! :) I love that...the life boats :)
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Warren Doll
Date: 6/7/2019 7:12:00 AM
Hi Heidi, I'm glad you enjoyed it. All the best~ Warren
Date: 5/1/2019 7:42:00 AM
Delightful haiku, Warren. Love the ants on leaf life boats. Enjoyed!
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Warren Doll
Date: 5/8/2019 11:23:00 AM
Thanks for your comments and visit, Bernard. Always appreciate your visit and critique. ~ Warren
Date: 4/17/2019 5:58:00 AM
Refreshing Haiku dear Warren! Much liked!
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Warren Doll
Date: 4/17/2019 2:20:00 PM
My friend, thank you for your comment and visit. All the best~ Warren
Date: 4/15/2019 10:44:00 PM
Very nice haiku Warren...great imagery..
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Warren Doll
Date: 4/17/2019 2:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joseph. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 4/3/2019 7:00:00 AM
What fun and timely imagery Warren and so deserving of your win!!
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Warren Doll
Date: 4/4/2019 5:53:00 PM
Mike, Thanks so much. Always great to hear from you!
Date: 3/21/2019 3:00:00 PM
Stunning Haiku dear Warren!
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/25/2019 9:26:00 AM
Thanks very much, Demetrios. I always enjoy your critique and visit, All the best to you my friend~ Warren
Date: 3/18/2019 5:40:00 PM
Well, I wonder what part of the earth this is taking place and if that is warm or very cold water. Thought provoking I should say. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the review of my work. Sara
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/19/2019 10:52:00 AM
Sara, thanks so much for your comments and visit. I enjoy reading your work too. All the best~ Warren
Date: 3/18/2019 1:30:00 PM
this fine haiku deserves a win, darren... my bog congrats to you!...huggs
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/19/2019 10:49:00 AM
Thanks you, nette. Congratulations on your first place win. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
Date: 3/18/2019 12:20:00 PM
A lovely descriptive three-liner, Warren. // paul
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/19/2019 10:45:00 AM
Thanks xo much, Paul. Best wishes~ Warren
Date: 3/18/2019 10:54:00 AM
Warren, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent haiku~
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/18/2019 10:58:00 AM
Dear Heart, thanks so much. I really enjoyed your contest. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
Date: 3/18/2019 4:25:00 AM
A perfect nature haiku Warren, loved the imagery. Congrats on your top.win. Tom
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/18/2019 8:02:00 AM
Hi Tom, thanks so much. I'm glad you like d it. Best Wishes~ Warren
Date: 3/17/2019 11:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved first placement Warren! xxoo
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/18/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thanks so much ,Connie All the best~ Warren
Date: 3/17/2019 7:01:00 PM
What a cute poem Warren many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/18/2019 7:56:00 AM
Hi Jan, great to hear from you. Thanks so much. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
Date: 3/17/2019 6:40:00 PM
A sweet and fun haiku, congratulations on your win!
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/18/2019 7:54:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tania, Best Wishes, Warren
Date: 3/17/2019 6:40:00 PM
Great Haiku, Warren, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/18/2019 7:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Eve. All the best~ Warren
Date: 3/17/2019 6:25:00 PM
a cute little story in this one. Congrats for your win, Warren.
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/18/2019 7:51:00 AM
Glad that you like it. Thanks so much, Andrea.
Date: 3/17/2019 3:00:00 PM
- Congratulations, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/17/2019 3:06:00 PM
Thank You Anne-Lise. Congratulations to you too! Warmest wishes Warren
Date: 3/17/2019 2:47:00 AM
Rain melts the snow and soon earth is covered in flowers. Lovely haiku Warren. Happy St. Patrick's Day! : ) xxoo
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/17/2019 3:01:00 PM
Hi Connie. Thanks for your positive comments and critique. Happy St. Patrick's Day to you too. Warmest wishes~ Warren
Date: 3/16/2019 11:45:00 AM
Excellent Haiku, so visual..
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/17/2019 2:56:00 PM
Glad you liked it , Harry. Best Wishes~ Warren
Date: 3/15/2019 2:17:00 PM
- A fun picture ... great written, Warren :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/17/2019 2:55:00 PM
Great to hear from you Anne-Lise. Thanks so much for your positive comments. Sending big hugs your way and wishing you the best~ Warren
Date: 3/15/2019 2:07:00 PM
What a fun poem! Well written :)
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/17/2019 2:52:00 PM
Hi Heidi, glad you liked it. Warmest wishes~ Warren
Date: 3/15/2019 1:39:00 PM
Great imagery! Love it!
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Warren Doll
Date: 3/17/2019 2:50:00 PM
Thanks Joe. I'm glad you love it. All the best~ Warren