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the dark side of . . . life where shadows and light entwine . . . humans lost . . . seeking _______________________ April 23, 2018 Poetry/Haiku/shadows and light Copyright Protected, ID 18-10016-414-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the haiku contest, sponsor, Mick Talbot First Place

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/1/2018 7:29:00 PM

Back with big {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/1/2018 2:55:00 AM

Well written hakiu BW. Congratulations. Tom.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2018 6:03:00 PM

Congrats for your win, Constance, and thanks for my placement in your contest you just closed out. ARe you busy writing and dancing? I have this long list of things to do and I just don't know if I can fit them all in today! (so hard to get to the writing of POEMS!!)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/27/2018 1:57:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win in the haiku contest Constance:-) hugs Jan xx

L. J. Carber

Date: 4/27/2018 9:09:00 AM

I like this-- it may not be hyperbole to suggest that in 3 lines you have laid out the dilemma that has afflicted our species since the first human being acquired sentience, or a soul for those of us who see that-- big time congrats, Broken Wings

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/27/2018 8:48:00 AM

Sadness and reality! Congrats!

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/27/2018 7:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this unique haiku. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2018 6:31:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/26/2018 10:50:00 PM

Deep dark and beautiful, BW. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/25/2018 7:15:00 AM

One can feel this way. You say it perfectly.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2018 6:59:00 PM

This is a very nice reflective one, Constance. I have not been putting many pictures up with my poetry lately. You are so good at matching up great illustrations with your work.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/24/2018 2:19:00 PM

Beautiful xo

Eve Roper

Date: 4/24/2018 12:05:00 AM

Nicely done, Broken Wings, I find haiku a little difficult to do .. good luck in the contest. Eve