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Haiku- Rain

it has rained for days and a hidden bird sings sweet . . . hundreds fly away _______________________ July 26, 2018 Poetry/haiku/rain Copyright Protected, ID 18-1046-170-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/2/2019 12:29:00 PM

Perfect :). Hugs Eve ~`*

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/28/2018 12:33:00 PM

when will the rain stop....actually, it's tear drops....pain given by cops....very inspiring bw as always....;)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/28/2018 9:23:00 AM

I like the imagery, nicely done!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/28/2018 4:47:00 AM

the hidden birds usually sing the sweetest of all. Nice.

Irfanulla Shariff

Date: 7/26/2018 11:40:00 PM

and a hidden bird sings sweet . . . I love the middle line of your poem. Beautiful Haiku! Well said in few words. All the best!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2018 7:14:00 PM

I like the imagery of this sweetly singing hidden bird, Constance.

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/26/2018 1:31:00 PM

Sweet tweet, best wishes BW...

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/26/2018 10:55:00 AM

the rain stops the birds frustration is then observed then sun revives words....;) unique and inspiring as always dear heart....I like that....;)