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Haiku- Rain

it has rained for days
and a hidden bird sings sweet . . .
     hundreds fly away

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July 26, 2018



Poetry/haiku/rain
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Eve Roper Date: 3/2/2019 12:29:00 PM Perfect :). Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply

Eric Boddie Date: 7/28/2018 12:33:00 PM when will the rain stop....actually, it's tear drops....pain given by cops....very inspiring bw as always....;) Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 7/28/2018 9:23:00 AM I like the imagery, nicely done! Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/28/2018 4:47:00 AM the hidden birds usually sing the sweetest of all. Nice. Login to Reply

Irfanulla Shariff Date: 7/26/2018 11:40:00 PM and a hidden bird sings sweet . . . I love the middle line of your poem. Beautiful Haiku! Well said in few words. All the best! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/26/2018 7:14:00 PM I like the imagery of this sweetly singing hidden bird, Constance. Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 7/26/2018 1:31:00 PM Sweet tweet, best wishes BW... Login to Reply

Eric Boddie Date: 7/26/2018 10:55:00 AM the rain stops the birds frustration is then observed then sun revives words....;) unique and inspiring as always dear heart....I like that....;) Login to Reply