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Haiku- Weeping Willow

willow is weeping
its branches drifting in breeze...
a baby crying




3/15/19
Sp-Dear Heart
Haiku poetry contest

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 3/29/2019 10:25:00 PM

Nice Haiku Barbara

Paul Callus

Date: 3/19/2019 6:00:00 AM

I like how you matched the weeping of the willow with the crying of the baby, Barbara. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Constance La France

Date: 3/18/2019 11:06:00 AM

Barbara, congratulations on your win in my contest with this fine haiku ~

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/18/2019 4:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Barbara. Tom

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/18/2019 9:50:00 AM

Thank you so much! BG

Jan Allison

Date: 3/17/2019 7:17:00 PM

oh so lovely Barbara!:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/18/2019 9:50:00 AM

Good to hear from you Jan. Thank you! BG

Eve Roper

Date: 3/17/2019 6:53:00 PM

Great Haiku, Barbara, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/18/2019 9:50:00 AM

Thank you Eve, nice to hear from you. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2019 6:34:00 PM

For me, yours was one of the best examples of haiku. Back with my congrats, sweetie.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/18/2019 9:49:00 AM

So good to hear from you..thank you. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2019 3:15:00 PM

- Love your use of metaphor in this haiku, Barbara :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/18/2019 9:49:00 AM

thank you so much! BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2019 6:46:00 PM

love your haiku moment !! How they should be done!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/15/2019 3:50:00 PM

such vivid portrait of a 'ku, barbara... winning wishes... huggs

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/15/2019 1:33:00 PM

Hi Barbara, Oh my, lovely imagery and content. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/15/2019 11:56:00 AM

Beautiful image Barbara, There was quite a few of them in a park by where I used to live as a child ,magnificent trees . You brought back memories of fifty odd years ago. Tom.