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haiku- weeping willow

willow is weeping
its branches drifting in breeze...
a baby crying




3/15/19
Sp-Dear Heart
Haiku poetry contest

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Date: 3/29/2019 10:25:00 PM
Nice Haiku Barbara
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Date: 3/22/2019 1:51:00 PM
I loved that connection! Regards, elsaR
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Date: 3/19/2019 6:00:00 AM
I like how you matched the weeping of the willow with the crying of the baby, Barbara. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/18/2019 11:06:00 AM
Barbara, congratulations on your win in my contest with this fine haiku ~
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Date: 3/18/2019 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Barbara. Tom
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/18/2019 9:50:00 AM
Thank you so much! BG
Date: 3/17/2019 7:17:00 PM
oh so lovely Barbara!:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/18/2019 9:50:00 AM
Good to hear from you Jan. Thank you! BG
Date: 3/17/2019 6:53:00 PM
Great Haiku, Barbara, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/18/2019 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Eve, nice to hear from you. BG
Date: 3/17/2019 6:34:00 PM
For me, yours was one of the best examples of haiku. Back with my congrats, sweetie.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/18/2019 9:49:00 AM
So good to hear from you..thank you. BG
Date: 3/17/2019 3:15:00 PM
- Love your use of metaphor in this haiku, Barbara :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/18/2019 9:49:00 AM
thank you so much! BG
Date: 3/15/2019 6:46:00 PM
love your haiku moment !! How they should be done!
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Date: 3/15/2019 3:50:00 PM
such vivid portrait of a 'ku, barbara... winning wishes... huggs
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Date: 3/15/2019 1:33:00 PM
Hi Barbara, Oh my, lovely imagery and content. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/15/2019 11:56:00 AM
Beautiful image Barbara, There was quite a few of them in a park by where I used to live as a child ,magnificent trees . You brought back memories of fifty odd years ago. Tom.
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Date: 3/15/2019 11:32:00 AM
Great imagery and metaphor, Barbara. Best wishes in Dear Heart's contest!
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Date: 3/15/2019 10:27:00 AM
love this clever haiku
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