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Haiku-# 1

Lone daffodil sways Defying April's last gust Rose bud winks with glee . A tale of late Spring .....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/12/2010 10:29:00 PM
A vibrant garden of verse!
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Date: 6/12/2010 10:29:00 PM
ps This one could be in Linda' contest with footnote to Spring!
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Date: 2/10/2009 8:32:00 AM
They hold on to hope with all their might for the better day to come. Could be a lesson in here for all of us! Beautiful image painted here, Sean! Think I'll hang this one in the Palace! Thank you for sharing, the Queen is pleased! QR
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Date: 12/3/2008 3:20:00 AM
Oh! I see this clearly and feel the breathe of Spring. Love this Haiku, Sean. Lainie
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Date: 10/31/2008 12:46:00 AM
This is a word painting...indeed
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Date: 10/14/2008 10:25:00 AM
Love the beauty of this piece! It's alive through the flower and the write is superb! Michael
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