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Hai-Ryu Sen-Ku

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So, as I sat, pondering the intricacies of the Haiku and Senryu the muse decided to have some fun with the vagaries of such sport.  I have dubbed it the Hai-ryu Sen-ku.

secrets some days sunlight ricochets plays hooky in the heavens hides among the clouds some nights moonlight meanders basking in cool soothing air hiding in plain sight sometimes sunlight and moonlight hang out on the horizon hugging each other John G. Lawless 8/15/2016

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Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/26/2016 8:58:00 AM
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john, incredible visuals... you took me there experiencing sun and moon!..huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 8/26/2016 9:30:00 AM
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Thanks Nette, I was just playing with the two forms and decided to wander with the muse
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/16/2016 11:54:00 PM
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Beautifully done!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/20/2016 7:14:00 AM
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Thanks Tom, I'm glad someone found this one hiding in the non-contest arena of PS.

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