Had I Known

How does one measure a day without shadows
Is there ever one day to hold in the sun
Or are we assigned to rewrite the story
Untangle the knots that kidnap the mind 
Arrange fragile moments, unravel the twine 

Where everything wonderful would fall into place
Choreographed order in every small thing
Where we could rephrase all the words we have said
and pretend to accept what lay ahead
Where we could take back each reckless thing we did, 
take back each careless step we took
and not be caught in the timeless vine
roping around us to be resigned

It might have changed the future then
if only we could undo then

There would be a different road out there
snaking its way through different hills
where snow would still sleep atop an alpine peak
and the road would end here at our feet

What was then
would not be was

Perhaps if I had known back then....
what was learned in time, somehow...

It might be,...       
     oh,... so different now...


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Contest: Resignation
Sponsor Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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August 6, 2014 at 7:56 PM
Awesome free verse, Carrie, Congratulations!!! :) On being one of the featured poets this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Lindley Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 5:44 PM
You captured looking back so very well my friend....This is one very fine write!!! Congrats on this jewel being featured this week!! Would have been a grave injustice had it not been IMHO!
Romaine Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 4:34 PM
Hey Carrie; Congratulations on your thoughtful poem being featured this week! Helps encourage others to take time and think before speaking and acting....Neva
Austin Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 11:00 AM
I like this one about retrospect. We all do it, I guess. Congrats on the selection. daver
Guzzi Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 7:55 PM
sounds like a song Carrie, excellent as always, hope you are having a great day! Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 6:31 AM
breathtakingly melancholic,carrie... love the emotional appeal of tnis piece.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
Deschler Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 2:55 PM
We all have those deep thoughts on the regrets and the what ifs. You captured those moments perfectly here. A wonderful write, Carrie! Congratulations on your well deserved first place win!
George   Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 5:01 AM
Dear Carrie, You write from you heart so softly and so tenderly and touch mine. Congratulations on your oh so well deserved first place. Lainie
Roberts Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 12:47 AM
Congratulations Carrie ......Seren
Guzzi Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 10:26 PM
Ahhh yes regret! very emotional Carrie, loved it. Light & Love
A. Sharma Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 10:09 PM
Extremely wonderful Carrie,,, great pen n so is the top first place win ! huge congrats !
Ponce Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 7:01 PM
Hi, Carrie. Congratulations, too. The way you have written this poem, no matter who the reader may be, evokes so many beautiful and vivid images of what could and could not have been; The wounds that won't mend; A painful nostalgia. I, myself, couldn't help but ponder and wonder as I brace myself to start over.
Walker  Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 4:34 PM
Great pen Carrie. A well deserve first place win and I want to congratulate you. Therefore, congratulations Carrie on placing first place in Craig contest. Verlena
Allison Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 2:25 PM
Fantastic write well deserved winner Carrie. hugs Jan xxx
Rodgers Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 1:13 PM
Lovely evocation of what might have been Congrats on your win
Gangabissoon Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 12:43 PM
Congrats on the win :) Very nice take on the theme
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 4:05 AM
A reflective and introspective poem that conveys past regrets in new light. A wonderful entry Carrie.
Sirak Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 7:53 AM
I love the whole poem, but the opening stanza is simply amazing. How many times I have said if only I knew then what I know now. So many things would have been done differently. But then I think if I had always made the right choices where would have been the room for growth?
Bauer Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 7:26 PM
ah yes, if only, if only...this is a wonderful poem, carrie - you've said it brilliantly!
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