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Had Been Humming

Had Been Humming Written after seeing modern rendition of Cinderella Cinderella, where could they send her Of good heart and so honest and pure Smile sweet as sugar so it did seem Movie was like being in a big dream. By lovely lady playing part was lured From her unhappiness could she be cured? Film all the way to finish from its start Left an impression on your heart. Children cried and to eyes tears would bring After they had seen such a sad thing Pretty things were at each scene's exposure Causing me to maintain my composure. Movie had been close to reaching an end And chills up my spine it started to send That gradually worked their way down When I saw her in a beautiful gown. What would I do if were to have a choice Return again and hear her great voice And all of the music was becoming Returned home and it we have been humming. James Thomas Horn Retired Veteran

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Date: 3/24/2015 8:24:00 AM
Wonderful write James! Congrats for reaching thousandth mark !!
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Date: 3/24/2015 8:03:00 PM
Have had a great time doing it thanks to all of you super duper poetry soupers. And I am always open to criticism and thoughts. Jim Horn
Date: 3/23/2015 7:29:00 PM
James, I have not been to see it yet, but I have seen the musical off Broadway and loved it. So many friends really enjoyed it that I have put it on my must see list. Sweet poem in honor of an undoubtedly unforgettable movie. Keep Humming! ~Jan
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Date: 3/23/2015 7:31:00 PM
Thanks for comment and glad to meet you. Now let me check out your poems. I am approaching my 1,000th poem. Jim

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