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ha-ha, my brother, joined the club, with a tilted back, and wheelies popped, from a mo-bile chair.* ha-ha’s looking for- the morning news, his glasses, a snooze… a giant donut to eat, to sit upon- so sweet. ha-ha rides his giant lab to the toilet seat. ha-ha laughs last at me- his sister joined this club initially. he laughs! he laughs! hee hee… ho ho… think i’ll poke him in the eye… where…are my…glasses? the joke died before I found my sight. truth is ha-ha’s fit as a fiddle fabulous on a winning streak truth is i love this old knucklehead, laughing hyena, my nemesis, my protégé. ha-ha’s a riot- i’m clutching my gut. it’s his birthday …ha-ha tag… you’re sixty! Happy Birthday, Bro! 9/16/2021 *He is not in a wheelchair nor bent over, just said in jest. Forgive me, if you, yourself have any of these conditions. Love you all <3

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Date: 9/20/2021 11:27:00 AM
What a terrific birthday poem! "truth is i love this old knucklehead, laughing hyena, my nemesis, my protégé." Fun!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2021 2:51:00 PM
Glad you liked this one! I think my brother did.
Date: 9/16/2021 11:10:00 AM
Hello Kim, Lol This was funny. i hope he had a good birthday. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/17/2021 11:06:00 AM
Hello Kim, i do love the donkey i do feel they are cute creatures. You are welcome my friend. enjoy your day my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2021 1:01:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene!
Date: 9/16/2021 10:47:00 AM
Lol lovely birthday tribute Kim hope he had a lovely day. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2021 10:59:00 AM
It’s today and hope so!! Thanks!
Date: 9/16/2021 8:30:00 AM
Is this for a contest? While one must not make fun with illnesses, we do laugh at those who trip easily. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2021 11:01:00 AM
He’s not ill as I said at the bottom. Just kidding him a bit. He turned 60 today. Not for a contest.

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