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H U G S

Come here, you big lug!

                            Don’t give me a shrug!

Or I’ll give you a slug!

                           Put down that mug!

Come give me a hug!

                           Cause that is my drug!

Got the loneliness bug!

                           Let’s roll on the rug!

And get really snug!

                           Oh, come…..


               Come give me a H U G!!!

Copyright © Eileen Manassian | Year Posted 2013

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Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 6/4/2013 1:59:00 PM Nothing beats a hug....and this is so sweet and cute! Big hug to you. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/9/2013 10:35:00 AM Thanks ever so much, Cecilia...right back at ya!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/2/2013 3:43:00 PM SO CUTE. so come on, did it win?? I am gonna go check that list .It sure deserved to!! Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 6/2/2013 11:53:00 AM Nice poem on hug enjoyed. "Come give me a hug! Cause that is my drug!" loved much. Good luck in the contest. Always, bl Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/9/2013 10:41:00 AM I'm a very huggy person, BL. Those lines are sure to pop out of my mouth many times a day! Thanks for the post!

Funom Makama Date: 6/1/2013 4:22:00 PM awww! Cute and witty.. Really loving this. Great write Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2013 4:23:00 PM Thanks, Funom! Glad you liked it! :)

Poet Tacito Date: 6/1/2013 8:36:00 AM Yes! Embracing the simple pleasures!!! How fun & necessary!!!! Excellent job! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2013 4:24:00 PM Hugging for me is a MUST! Can't live without it!

Timothy Hicks Date: 6/1/2013 12:40:00 AM Such a different atmosphere coming from you! I loved the lightheartedness of it (I have a nephew that avoids hugs like the plague... maybe I should read him your poem and see if he changes his mind... lol!). Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2013 4:25:00 PM Yea...you should. If he gets together with someone who has TOUCH as their love language...he's in trouble! ;) Thanks for the visit, Timothy!

Arthur Vaso Date: 5/31/2013 10:01:00 PM Wonderful!!! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2013 4:26:00 PM Shoukran!

Richard D Seal Date: 5/31/2013 6:43:00 PM Awwwwwwww you don't need to ask twice my little Desert Orchid (((((((((((((((hug))))))))))))) erm how did you I had a mug in my hand lol Great poem Eileen, I believe you on the slug. Take care, Richard Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2013 4:27:00 PM Really? Don't need to ask twice? What a relief! Yea...I would slug ya! ;) HUGS back at ya!

Harry Horsman Date: 5/31/2013 2:46:00 PM wow what an invitation this is, and truly wonderful poetry to boot... just love this... Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2013 4:28:00 PM Thanks, Harry...glad you think so. It didn't place on the competition, but glad you consider it wonderful poetry! Hugs!

Delysia Hendricks Date: 5/31/2013 1:49:00 PM lol. Geez, you managed the same rhyme throughout, no mean feat. A big, fat hug to you, Eileen. Licia :-) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2013 4:28:00 PM WOW! The bigger the FATTER...the BETTER! Hugs back at ya, Lecia! :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/31/2013 8:06:00 AM I love it in it's simplicity. It's good to say what you need. Hugs Rick Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2013 4:29:00 PM Good to say what I need, Richard, but that doesn't always mean that I'll be fortunate enough to get it! ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/31/2013 5:13:00 AM - Cool, Eileen!! - Hugs to you! - Have a great weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2013 4:30:00 PM Anne Lise...thanks, my dear! Hope you're enjoying yours! Hugs right back at ya!

Ilene Bauer Date: 5/30/2013 3:20:00 PM so different from your usual style, but i really enjoyed it! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2013 4:31:00 PM Good to mix things up a bit, isn't it? Love to be unpredictable!

Heather Ober Date: 5/30/2013 2:55:00 PM Super cute!! This brightened my day :) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2013 4:32:00 PM Super cute just like you, my dear! :) Hugs!

Carrie Richards Date: 5/30/2013 2:19:00 PM Be careful of those rug burns!!! :) !!!! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2013 4:23:00 PM ;) They are worth it, my dear! ;)