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Gush of Mid-January

As mockingbirds flee in the cadence of pellucid rain , drizzles hide a vermillion moon that is twilight’s burst: still, a gush so dulcet spawns a melody while stray buds, pebbles, and lit ripples tap my feet on a menagerie of glass. And droplets infuse a mid-January tempo granting sweet content, where luscious drift from trickles slip-slides on hours bathed in a fresh cycle , her ancestral rite of cleansing past errors... then to tug, devour, to grasp a new purpose. Briam's Choice Y

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Date: 1/12/2018 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your wonderful win! Well done.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:55:00 AM
Terrific work Nette, congratulations...
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Date: 1/11/2018 7:45:00 PM
Lovely Nette! Congrats on your win!! ~Judy
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Date: 1/11/2018 7:19:00 PM
Good mix with all those words, enjoyed this poem and its unique impression nette;-)
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Date: 1/11/2018 6:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Well done.
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Date: 1/11/2018 5:38:00 PM
Well done! Congratulations Nette :)
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Date: 1/11/2018 4:39:00 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/11/2018 3:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win Nette
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Date: 1/11/2018 2:49:00 PM
Some great lines in your poem nette, you used the words very well... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/11/2018 12:33:00 PM
Gorgeous Nette. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 1/11/2018 10:21:00 AM
Beautiful interplay between poetic power and the ten words of challenge ... Enjoyed reading, Nette ... Best wishes ...
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Date: 1/10/2018 9:15:00 PM
Hi Nette, I missed a lot of your poems.... Have a blessed new year. Cheryl
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Date: 1/10/2018 6:45:00 PM
Beautifully penned Nette...best wishes
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Date: 1/10/2018 2:50:00 PM
- 10 difficult words, Nette - But, you're doing it so wonderful - Will rank high on the winning list, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/10/2018 10:15:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Nette. I rooted 25 or 30 Frangipani from cuttings (Plumeria-Melemele specifically) last year and gave them to people I work with, white with yellow throats and very fragrant. I'm not sure which day it is but happy birthday.
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Date: 1/10/2018 6:22:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your scenic poem, nette..your words flow and rise to high purpose..best for a win.
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