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Below lies Gus Hit by a bus Crossing the road To save a toad AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on August 10, 2021 for A BRIAN STRAND 1 TO 14 LINE POETRY contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST and April 14, 2019 for contest AN EPITAPH TO MAKE US LAUGH 2 sponsored by JESSE ROWE

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Date: 4/17/2019 1:29:00 AM
I almost got killed once trying to save a snapping turtle that was turned upside down; when I got closer he was much bigger than expected, and tried to bite me. I dropped him, but he was enormous and it did him no harm. Or her. Who knows? Anyway, thanks for the memory.
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Date: 4/17/2019 7:36:00 AM
I'm sure your heroic efforts did not go unappreciated... though some have strange ways of expressing it.
Date: 4/16/2019 6:46:00 AM
Ribbit in peace Gus...he croaked too soon lol...great entry Line...BOL...^WW^
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Date: 4/16/2019 8:11:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and condolences, WW.
Date: 4/15/2019 8:13:00 PM
Ooh, that does smart...well, for Gus anyway. Funny one.
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Date: 4/15/2019 9:17:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, ML.
Date: 4/15/2019 11:46:00 AM
All they found was his hat Because Gus was left flat! I like this one Line
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Date: 4/15/2019 12:03:00 PM
Too bad this epitaph needed to be 4 lines only due to budget restrictions.
Date: 4/14/2019 4:31:00 PM
Love it..winner. BG
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Date: 4/14/2019 4:36:00 PM
Thanks for the vote of confidence, Barbara. LOL
Date: 4/14/2019 1:02:00 PM
very cute..good luck :)-luloo
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Date: 4/14/2019 1:48:00 PM
Thanks, Lu Loo, Much appreciated.
Date: 4/14/2019 10:50:00 AM
Haha, poor Gus, could just see it Line, Gus in a heap and the toad hopping away oblivious to the goings on around him. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 4/14/2019 12:47:00 PM
Yes - lucky toad! LOL

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