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Gulp! I wonder aloud where others can’t listen, so I can keep my thoughts in a row About a girl, up on the fourth floor, a heaven sent beauty that I’d like to know Merely a daydream, for I am nobody, least not the kind that she’d ever see Sort of a nerd, not very handsome, down in the mailroom, just plain old me But I can’t help it, I find her amazing, hair chocolate brown, lips rosy pink And when she smiles my heart goes a flutter, I start feeling faint or close to the brink I’m just afraid if she says something to me, gives me a nod, knows I am there I’d merely mumble, do something stupid, frozen in fear, stand there and stare Probably shiver, break out in a sweat, act like a dork, well that’s nothing new She is an angel and I am a loser, so I shouldn’t worry, that won’t come true Time to get busy, the minutes are passing, I’m on a schedule and I better start I straighten my tie, my pocket protector, sort through the mail and load up my cart Start my deliveries, I do them in order The closer I get, more nervous I feel I try to be cool but that isn’t working, my pulse it is racing, that I can’t conceal I’m almost finished, just hers are remaining Her office is next, I step in real slow Set down the letters don’t want to disturb her, when she looks up and then says “hello…” Gulp! For the Fear Poetry Contest Sponsored by The Seeker

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Date: 2/21/2017 3:17:00 PM
Heh! Awesome write :) a seven for this one. I've frequented so many mailrooms; your story characters I know, this one, a vivid film it plays in my head. Sweet. xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 4:02:00 PM
Thanks so much Maureen. Having a little fun with an alter ego. :) I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 2/21/2017 12:04:00 PM
I agree w/Darren. Such an endearing poem, it reminded me of me ... a shy guy. Love the tempo of anticipation, solid w/good bounce. Your basketball hoop dreams came true, she saw you and spoke to you. Wonderful poem, Chris. Love and peace.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 12:07:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend. Just hoping to promote a few smiles today with this one.
Date: 2/21/2017 11:16:00 AM
Awwww, this is endearing :) Such a sweet take on the subject fear and yet so perfectly understandable! I love nerds :) Good luck in the contest!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 12:07:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend. Just a lighthearted look at the fear of approaching someone you are attracted to.
Date: 2/21/2017 10:43:00 AM
A nerd is worth the effort and so fun to cuddle up with. My nerd likes sci-fi and sheds tears at movies! Nice one, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 12:06:00 PM
Hey, I like sci-fi too and I cry at commercials if they are happy. :) Thanks so much Kim.
Date: 2/21/2017 9:55:00 AM
A smart woman can read body language very quickly :)...So I bet She noticed you .Lol. Really loved your entertaining poem..Who knows..maybe you should read it to her Ha :)..
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine, that's an idea but I don't think it will happen. :)
Date: 2/21/2017 9:51:00 AM
I think she might have noticed you as well.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 9:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Tim for your comment and the heads up.
Date: 2/21/2017 9:40:00 AM
Creative fun write about a nervous nerd Chris! Enjoyed! G/L in the contest!~Che :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 9:59:00 AM
Thanks so very much Cheryl.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/21/2017 9:57:00 AM
:)..This comment made me chuckle..Nervous Nerd???? :)

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