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There's a poet gun-shy 'bout limericks He sure wants to get over that right quick So he's penning these lines He's refraining from whines Hoping that his good intentions will stick

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Date: 11/30/2021 8:58:00 PM
"he's refraining from whines" -always a great choice; I wish everyone would do it.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/30/2021 9:18:00 PM
You know what a Jewish wife's favorite wine is, Caren? -- No? It's "I wanna go to Florida!' lol. ~ Listen to 'er whine...
Date: 11/30/2021 1:59:00 PM
nicely done, gershon! i applaud the fact that you're willing to branch out (something i rarely do!).
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/30/2021 7:53:00 PM
This is the season to branch out, I guess -- like the branches of the Chanukah menorah. ~ A Stretch, but...
Date: 11/29/2021 9:37:00 PM
This is a terrific limerick, Gershon. And, I can assure you that your good intentions are not only appreciated, they will stick wherever they land!
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Date: 11/29/2021 8:16:00 PM
Your good intentions will stick, definitelty they will strike, you can try your luck !
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/29/2021 8:25:00 PM
I'll keep trying, Valsa. How can I not, what with all of your encouragement. Thank you! Moonbeams and Starlight, gw
Date: 11/29/2021 7:31:00 PM
They take a bit but it is a great poet-muscle stretch…watch out for the charlie horse ;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/29/2021 8:23:00 PM
Charlie's horse is rapidly overtaking me, I'm afraid. lol. ~ Old Aches and Pains
Date: 11/29/2021 6:50:00 PM
Gershon, this can't be about you! This is an outstanding Limerick, Debra
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/29/2021 8:18:00 PM
If this isn't about me, my first name doesn't start with 'G!' (Yes, it is, of course.)... So glad you like this limerick, Debra. Happy Days, Gershon
Date: 11/29/2021 6:47:00 PM
I’ve never doubted that your intentions are good, and thankful that you have a positive attitude.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/29/2021 8:19:00 PM
Jenna, I really appreciate what you've written. It's given me quite a lift. Thank you so much for having my back. Season's blessings to you and yours, Gershon

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