Grrrrrrrrrr

Grrrrrrrrrr a Boa slithers by, Grrrrrrrrrr
a sentient mothers cry. Her form
neither sensed or seen, blended by
the forest green. Phantom of the
forest floor, she treads so soft, a
quiet paw. Her body sleek no surplus 
ounce, reactions sharp the purrrfect
pounce. Stillness rules that amber 
eye, a beating heart in darkening sky.
For her the world grows smaller, the
trees fall and the buildings taller.
Houses, factories, breed like sin, she 
must move or die within. Her spotted 
coat a painting pure, stealth and
strength, can she endure. Her future
threatened, her world s dying, the 
forest sounds of wildlife crying.
Oh! that amber eye, stares at me
and asks of why. She turns her head 
and walks away, soft paws tread and 
live that day.

The Jaguar under so much pressure.
Their numbers dwindle we should be
so ashamed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Owens Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 7:58 PM
You can have the Boa but I rather like Jaquars...Especially the kind with motors...lol...Love your poem...Marty
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February 1, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Jaguars are magnificent creatures and very fast too.. I luv Leopards..sleek and cool...the snake actually I would be wary of but reads cool in your poem.. grrrrrrr..luv.. Linda-Marie.. SOUP MAIL..
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 9:37 AM
The Jaguar is a very beautiful animal but I would not want to look one face to face in the wild. Great write that is educational and a tribute to the animal. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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February 1, 2010 at 8:14 AM
The image of this boa staring at you accusatorily gives me the chills, Daniel. Because of over development and dwindling habitat, Florida's state animal -- The Florida Panther -- faced extinction. We had to import Western cougars to replenish the species, but they will never be pure panthers again. Indeed, we should be "so ashamed." Excellent write that evokes compassion for endangered species. Much love, carolyn
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