Growth

Many who are no deeper than a mere puddle, blame it on the rain. ... CayCay Jennings August 30, 2018

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/1/2018 7:42:00 AM

An insightful monoku, CayCay:)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/31/2018 4:46:00 PM

I love it CayCay! In her rules she asks for the proverb to be in bold print below your date so don't forget to add that. xxoo

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/31/2018 8:52:00 AM

See what you mean, we are from the same gutter, well done...

Caycay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 2:16:00 PM

At this point in my journey, our gutter suits me 'content' - I believe content to be a most powerful, positive feel. Should my roads present it, I may upgrade to a new level gutter someday and you, too! Yeah, same thought's pretty cool. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/31/2018 8:42:00 AM

Good one, CayCay! Janice

Caycay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 2:17:00 PM

Thank you, Ms. Janice. Take the best possible care of you and your wonderful imagination. All the best ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 8/31/2018 6:45:00 AM

sure made me smile when I read your comments to Caren:-) hugs jan xx

Caycay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 7:08:00 AM

Made me smile to see You here, Jan - always a pleasure! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/31/2018 5:56:00 AM

Profound... despite the depth of the water, lol! Adored it dearest, CayCay!

Caycay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 7:10:00 AM

That means a great deal coming from you, my favorite in-house philosophy professor. All the best to you ... CayCay

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/31/2018 12:42:00 AM

I read this backwards, forwards, and upside down and it made sense in every direction, CayCay. All the best.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 12:51:00 AM

You silly puddle of depth, I thank you. Frankly, I'm not sure anyone gets it, not yet anyway. I often refer to my ex's philosophical and belief systems as null 'cause he's no deeper than a puddle, which he insisted was not his fault, thus the monoku. Go splash joy as joy does splash, wonderful lady. CayCay