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Growing Old Together

They wed when he was twenty-one, she was seventeen; Fate, he knew, destined her to be his lifelong queen. It seemed only yesterday since their first tender kiss, Now the aged couple were nigh sixty years of wedded bliss. They shared many peaks and valleys throughout the years, Lean times, laughter, a sprinkling of sorrow and tears, But their loyalty and faith conquered all such things; Eternal devotion they vowed when exchanging wedding rings. E'en tho' her hair has turned from gold to bonnie gray, He tells her she is more beautiful with each passing day. No sweeter sound to him could she e'er evince, Than to hear her call him still her charming prince. Each dawn when she awakes from her sweet repose, He places in her hands an exquisite yellow rose, Kisses her cheek, saying, "I'll always cherish you, dear!" She responds with sweet talk he always likes to hear! They hold the others' hand as they take their daily stroll, But they walk a bit slower, alas, time does take its toll. 'Tis evident that they still enjoy that youthful thrill, That only a lifetime of romance and devotion can instill! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (© All Rights Reserved) Honorable Mention in John Heck's "A Warm Embrace" Contest - June 2010

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Date: 6/16/2013 5:38:00 PM
Bob H., How are you this lovely evening? :-) Congratulations with having your awesome poem featured on the soups home page.... sending hugs. Hope you are enjoying this day with your family. always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 7/1/2010 2:28:00 PM
Hi Robert - What a great poem. Love it. Haven't heard "charming prince" lately...oh for the good old days...thanks for the kind remarks on my poem. Have a great day..Terry
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Date: 6/25/2010 8:29:00 PM
I hope it is you, right? Congratulations for your win in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/25/2010 11:14:00 AM
Hi Bob :) One could only wish and pray to be as lucky to find this kind of love in their lives--this is really beautifully written and thank you again so much for all your comments in my poems :) congrats on your HM with this --nikko :)
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Date: 6/18/2010 4:35:00 AM
I love it....I think I'd pick you too LOL but you are well and throughly taken! Good for you! Light & Love
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Date: 6/16/2010 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John Heck's contest "A Warm Embrace" Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2010 9:02:00 AM
Beautiful poem we can all learn from. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/12/2010 6:24:00 PM
Congrats on the HM win, Bob
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Date: 6/12/2010 4:48:00 PM
Congrats Bob on your HM in the Warm Embrace contest... a wonderful write and most special honor for u to enjoy ... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/7/2010 1:31:00 PM
OH Bob this is breathtaking.. full of romance and luv and special flavor all its own.. a true deep luv abides between two souls and two soul mates.. good luck in the contest... its tears of joy as I read.. a desire of my heart.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/13/2010 4:53:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Robert. Please continue to share your writing with us. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/12/2010 5:59:00 PM
Beautiful poem...love it...Marty
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Date: 1/12/2010 2:52:00 PM
They may be walking "a bit slower" now, but they know how to keep love alive. It's always great to read about love that endures the test of time. You have now become one of my favorite writers, Robert. Excellent AGAIN! Love, Carolyn
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