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The moon is hidden out of sight I come to you at dead of night The latch is lifted on the door You stand aloof as I implore I kneel and grovel on the floor I am aware of the full score The whip is flicked; I crawl to you In leather dressed, I take your cue Out come the blindfold and the rope With knots and teasing I can cope You have your urges and the need To act on impulse and to feed On domination, unrestrained Within the mind it is ingrained You find release in mistress role But I, the slave, am in control Now is the time to beg of you At height of passion what is due Intense the climax of this game I reach my aim; you call my name. [Pride of place I shall fill ....... On Camera & Quill!] ------------------------------------------------ 11th October, 2015 Contest: You Want It Bad-Then Bribe Me... Sponsor: Casarah Nance Placed 3rd Chosen POTD ~ 12th October, 2015

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/23/2018 3:57:00 PM

50 shades of Paul! Well done my friend. Thanks for commenting on my piece;0)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/3/2018 12:34:00 PM

Thank you, Richard...and excuse the late reply; been having computer problems. Regards // paul

Ryan Lucas

Date: 5/18/2016 4:51:00 PM

Whoa... Great write Paul! Is there any way I convince you to let me put your poem to music?

Paul Callus
Date: 5/18/2016 5:40:00 PM

Hi Ryan....pleased to meet you, and glad that you enjoyed this poem. Incidentally I write lyrics for songs, and it would be a pleasure for me to 'collaborate' with you! So, why not...go ahead...on condition that I get to hear it:) Regards // paul

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/23/2015 12:14:00 PM

A passionate, intense write, Paul! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Paul Callus
Date: 5/18/2016 5:50:00 PM

Oh Kim....so sorry about the late reply....somehow I must have missed your comment, not like me at all!! Thank you for reading and liking...and the congrats:) Warm regards.....paul

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/21/2015 6:23:00 PM

Congratulations Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 11/22/2015 8:28:00 AM

Thank you Nayda; your visit is appreciated:) All the best. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/21/2015 2:37:00 AM

You have done it well Paul and thank goodness you reached your aim. A very nice one, congrats on the win...hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 11/21/2015 3:48:00 AM

Love your cute comments, Kayode:) Thank you for your sincere support. All the best. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/20/2015 11:28:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb poetry Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/21/2015 3:50:00 AM

Thank you Upma. Big congrats go to your high-flying entry, too:) Have a nice weekend. ~ Regards // paul

Skat A

Date: 11/20/2015 10:53:00 PM

Paul, Congratulations on your wonderful OCTOBER win. I'm inviting you in hopes you enjoy my blog "I am the Pen" wrapping up October and its late winners :( Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Forever & Ever **SKAT**

Paul Callus
Date: 11/21/2015 3:45:00 AM

Thank you Skat. Will go pay your blog a visit. Hugs // paul

Lu Loo

Date: 11/20/2015 10:33:00 PM

Congrats on your win! -LU

Paul Callus
Date: 11/21/2015 3:34:00 AM

Thank you Laura. Looking up I can also see your name on the winners' list:) Have a nice weekend. ~ Regards // paul

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/23/2015 7:43:00 PM

Oh my my! Go Paul Light & Love

Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2015 6:54:00 PM

Thank you for a lovely, welcome visit, Debbie! ~ Have a nice weekend! // paul

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/20/2015 10:31:00 AM

Very interesting and riveting piece, Paul! Congrats! Always, Laura

Paul Callus
Date: 10/20/2015 12:39:00 PM

Thank you Laura. Somewhat different from my usual writes, but had to take up Casarah's challenge! ~ Regards // paul

Tammy Reams

Date: 10/17/2015 9:31:00 PM

What a fantastic write Paul! Loved the leather dress! Congrats on your win.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/18/2015 4:48:00 AM

Thank you Tammy. Glad you enjoyed it! Have a lovely day. ~ Regards // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/16/2015 11:18:00 AM

You knew your audience and you played up to her well. This has dominatrix fantasy fulfilled written all over it. I LOVED IT. Congrats on the win AND on POTD. Apassionata is thrilled.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/16/2015 12:04:00 PM

Thank you for coming back with this lovely feedback and congrats, Eileen:) Yes, I believe that it is important to know the persons we are dealing with; like that we can understand better their feelings and emotions when we read their poetry. It does make a difference! Appassionata is both supportive and generous:) Hugs // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/15/2015 11:50:00 AM

Paul, congrats on the win, LINDA

Paul Callus
Date: 10/15/2015 3:06:00 PM

Thank you Linda! I enjoyed your top winning entry:) Did I hear the cork popping!! hugs // paul

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/14/2015 7:13:00 PM

Oh, my gosh - how did I miss this! I love it, love it - you really whipped this one out in the most clever way! Very imaginative (is it?) ... CayCay

Paul Callus
Date: 10/15/2015 3:48:00 PM

I love your spontaneous reaction to this poem, CayCay:) So pleased that you like it. Yes, imagination played a major part in it! ~ Regards // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/14/2015 11:36:00 AM

:-))) I guess you saw the movie...there's too much shade of it here. Thermosensual bribe also won the POTD! Congrats on both wins, Paul! hugs!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2015 4:55:00 PM

Sorry to disappoint you, Kim...but I have neither read the book nor seen the movie:)) But....I have read most of Casarah's poems, so I stand on firm ground:) Thank you for the double congrats. Hope you are not being overworked! Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/13/2015 7:35:00 PM

My personal favorite, congratulations.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2015 4:51:00 PM

Thank you for liking, and for the congrats, Richard. All the best. // paul

Michael Tor

Date: 10/13/2015 4:03:00 AM

Paul a favorite of mine for the contest. Congratulations for POTD and for this win, well deserving.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2015 4:43:00 PM

I appreciate the double congrats and lovely comments, Michael. Thank you! // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/12/2015 11:22:00 PM

Awesome write n win Paul, it ended so well with call of ur name! Big congrats!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2015 4:35:00 PM

Thank you, Upma. I kind of like that end line myself:) All the best. // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/12/2015 10:56:00 PM

Paul, Congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2015 4:27:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis. When bribing a person we have to study well their strengths and weaknesses!:) // paul

Lu Loo

Date: 10/12/2015 8:23:00 PM

Great job!! -LU

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2015 4:21:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed, Laura. Thank you for stopping by:) // paul

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/12/2015 6:34:00 PM

You bribed in your own way, Paul....and it worked !!! Good job and big Congrats to you!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2015 3:49:00 PM

Thank you Carrie; I enjoyed your winning entry, too. ~ Regards // paul

Skat A

Date: 10/12/2015 2:36:00 PM

I love this one Paul, I see a double congrats on here. Congrats with your placement and POTD... SKAT

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2015 3:45:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by with double congrats, Skat! Glad you enjoyed it, too. Sweet regards ~ paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/12/2015 2:33:00 PM

Poem of the day and on the winners list...geez Paul you are sure scoring with this write...You know me too well...should I be worried? lol. I loved this thanks !!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2015 3:43:00 PM

Thank you Casarah; I'm as pleased as Punch to be placed high on your winning list:) Should you be worried? Definitely not:))) On the contrary...shows that your works are well read:) // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 10/12/2015 2:32:00 PM

Wonderful write, Paul, and congratulations on Poem of the Day.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2015 3:39:00 PM

Glad you like it, Eve; thank you! hugs // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/12/2015 2:30:00 PM

Back to congratulate you, Paul! I knew I would see this on the winner's list! Congrats. Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2015 3:29:00 PM

So nice of you to come back with congrats, Sandra. Thank you. // paul