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The moon is hidden out of sight I come to you at dead of night The latch is lifted on the door You stand aloof as I implore I kneel and grovel on the floor I am aware of the full score The whip is flicked; I crawl to you In leather dressed, I take your cue Out come the blindfold and the rope With knots and teasing I can cope You have your urges and the need To act on impulse and to feed On domination, unrestrained Within the mind it is ingrained You find release in mistress role But I, the slave, am in control Now is the time to beg of you At height of passion what is due Intense the climax of this game I reach my aim; you call my name. [Pride of place I shall fill ....... On Camera & Quill!] ------------------------------------------------ 11th October, 2015 Contest: You Want It Bad-Then Bribe Me... Sponsor: Casarah Nance Placed 3rd Chosen POTD ~ 12th October, 2015

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Date: 6/23/2018 3:57:00 PM
50 shades of Paul! Well done my friend. Thanks for commenting on my piece;0)
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Date: 7/3/2018 12:34:00 PM
Thank you, Richard...and excuse the late reply; been having computer problems. Regards // paul
Date: 5/18/2016 4:51:00 PM
Whoa... Great write Paul! Is there any way I convince you to let me put your poem to music?
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Date: 5/18/2016 5:40:00 PM
Hi Ryan....pleased to meet you, and glad that you enjoyed this poem. Incidentally I write lyrics for songs, and it would be a pleasure for me to 'collaborate' with you! So, why not...go ahead...on condition that I get to hear it:) Regards // paul
Date: 11/23/2015 12:14:00 PM
A passionate, intense write, Paul! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/18/2016 5:50:00 PM
Oh Kim....so sorry about the late reply....somehow I must have missed your comment, not like me at all!! Thank you for reading and liking...and the congrats:) Warm regards.....paul
Date: 11/21/2015 6:23:00 PM
Congratulations Paul
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Date: 11/22/2015 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Nayda; your visit is appreciated:) All the best. // paul
Date: 11/21/2015 2:37:00 AM
You have done it well Paul and thank goodness you reached your aim. A very nice one, congrats on the win...hugs
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:48:00 AM
Love your cute comments, Kayode:) Thank you for your sincere support. All the best. // paul
Date: 11/20/2015 11:28:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb poetry Paul!
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:50:00 AM
Thank you Upma. Big congrats go to your high-flying entry, too:) Have a nice weekend. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 11/20/2015 10:53:00 PM
Paul, Congratulations on your wonderful OCTOBER win. I'm inviting you in hopes you enjoy my blog "I am the Pen" wrapping up October and its late winners :( Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:45:00 AM
Thank you Skat. Will go pay your blog a visit. Hugs // paul
Date: 11/20/2015 10:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win! -LU
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:34:00 AM
Thank you Laura. Looking up I can also see your name on the winners' list:) Have a nice weekend. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/23/2015 7:43:00 PM
Oh my my! Go Paul Light & Love
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Date: 10/24/2015 6:54:00 PM
Thank you for a lovely, welcome visit, Debbie! ~ Have a nice weekend! // paul
Date: 10/20/2015 10:31:00 AM
Very interesting and riveting piece, Paul! Congrats! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/20/2015 12:39:00 PM
Thank you Laura. Somewhat different from my usual writes, but had to take up Casarah's challenge! ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/17/2015 9:31:00 PM
What a fantastic write Paul! Loved the leather dress! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/18/2015 4:48:00 AM
Thank you Tammy. Glad you enjoyed it! Have a lovely day. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/16/2015 11:18:00 AM
You knew your audience and you played up to her well. This has dominatrix fantasy fulfilled written all over it. I LOVED IT. Congrats on the win AND on POTD. Apassionata is thrilled.
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Date: 10/16/2015 12:04:00 PM
Thank you for coming back with this lovely feedback and congrats, Eileen:) Yes, I believe that it is important to know the persons we are dealing with; like that we can understand better their feelings and emotions when we read their poetry. It does make a difference! Appassionata is both supportive and generous:) Hugs // paul
Date: 10/15/2015 11:50:00 AM
Paul, congrats on the win, LINDA
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Date: 10/15/2015 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Linda! I enjoyed your top winning entry:) Did I hear the cork popping!! hugs // paul
Date: 10/14/2015 7:13:00 PM
Oh, my gosh - how did I miss this! I love it, love it - you really whipped this one out in the most clever way! Very imaginative (is it?) ... CayCay
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Date: 10/15/2015 3:48:00 PM
I love your spontaneous reaction to this poem, CayCay:) So pleased that you like it. Yes, imagination played a major part in it! ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/14/2015 11:36:00 AM
:-))) I guess you saw the movie...there's too much shade of it here. Thermosensual bribe also won the POTD! Congrats on both wins, Paul! hugs!
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Date: 10/14/2015 4:55:00 PM
Sorry to disappoint you, Kim...but I have neither read the book nor seen the movie:)) But....I have read most of Casarah's poems, so I stand on firm ground:) Thank you for the double congrats. Hope you are not being overworked! Hugs // paul
Date: 10/13/2015 7:35:00 PM
My personal favorite, congratulations.
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Date: 10/14/2015 4:51:00 PM
Thank you for liking, and for the congrats, Richard. All the best. // paul
Date: 10/13/2015 4:03:00 AM
Paul a favorite of mine for the contest. Congratulations for POTD and for this win, well deserving.
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Date: 10/14/2015 4:43:00 PM
I appreciate the double congrats and lovely comments, Michael. Thank you! // paul
Date: 10/12/2015 11:22:00 PM
Awesome write n win Paul, it ended so well with call of ur name! Big congrats!
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Date: 10/14/2015 4:35:00 PM
Thank you, Upma. I kind of like that end line myself:) All the best. // paul
Date: 10/12/2015 10:56:00 PM
Paul, Congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/14/2015 4:27:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis. When bribing a person we have to study well their strengths and weaknesses!:) // paul
Date: 10/12/2015 8:23:00 PM
Great job!! -LU
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Date: 10/14/2015 4:21:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed, Laura. Thank you for stopping by:) // paul
Date: 10/12/2015 6:34:00 PM
You bribed in your own way, Paul....and it worked !!! Good job and big Congrats to you!
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Date: 10/14/2015 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Carrie; I enjoyed your winning entry, too. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/12/2015 2:36:00 PM
I love this one Paul, I see a double congrats on here. Congrats with your placement and POTD... SKAT
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Date: 10/14/2015 3:45:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by with double congrats, Skat! Glad you enjoyed it, too. Sweet regards ~ paul
Date: 10/12/2015 2:33:00 PM
Poem of the day and on the winners list...geez Paul you are sure scoring with this write...You know me too well...should I be worried? lol. I loved this thanks !!
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Date: 10/14/2015 3:43:00 PM
Thank you Casarah; I'm as pleased as Punch to be placed high on your winning list:) Should you be worried? Definitely not:))) On the contrary...shows that your works are well read:) // paul
Date: 10/12/2015 2:32:00 PM
Wonderful write, Paul, and congratulations on Poem of the Day.
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Date: 10/14/2015 3:39:00 PM
Glad you like it, Eve; thank you! hugs // paul
Date: 10/12/2015 2:30:00 PM
Back to congratulate you, Paul! I knew I would see this on the winner's list! Congrats. Sandra
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Date: 10/14/2015 3:29:00 PM
So nice of you to come back with congrats, Sandra. Thank you. // paul
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