Paul Callus Poet Couplet

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Grovelling

The moon is hidden out of sight
I come to you at dead of night
The latch is lifted on the door
You stand aloof as I implore
I kneel and grovel on the floor
I am aware of the full score
The whip is flicked; I crawl to you
In leather dressed, I take your cue
Out come the blindfold and the rope
With knots and teasing I can cope
You have your urges and the need
To act on impulse and to feed
On domination, unrestrained
Within the mind it is ingrained
You find release in mistress role
But I, the slave, am in control
Now is the time to beg of you
At height of passion what is due
Intense the climax of this game
I reach my aim; you call my name.

[Pride of place I shall fill
....... On Camera & Quill!]

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11th October, 2015
Contest: You Want It Bad-Then Bribe Me...
Sponsor: Casarah Nance 
Placed 3rd
Chosen POTD ~ 12th October, 2015

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Richard Lamoureux June 23, 2018 at 3:57 PM 50 shades of Paul! Well done my friend. Thanks for commenting on my piece;0) Paul Callus July 3, 2018 at 12:34 PM Thank you, Richard...and excuse the late reply; been having computer problems. Regards // paul

Ryan Lucas May 18, 2016 at 4:51 PM Whoa... Great write Paul! Is there any way I convince you to let me put your poem to music? Paul Callus May 18, 2016 at 5:40 PM Hi Ryan....pleased to meet you, and glad that you enjoyed this poem. Incidentally I write lyrics for songs, and it would be a pleasure for me to 'collaborate' with you! So, why not...go ahead...on condition that I get to hear it:) Regards // paul

Kim Merryman November 23, 2015 at 12:14 PM A passionate, intense write, Paul! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Paul Callus May 18, 2016 at 5:50 PM Oh Kim....so sorry about the late reply....somehow I must have missed your comment, not like me at all!! Thank you for reading and liking...and the congrats:) Warm regards.....paul

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 21, 2015 at 6:23 PM Congratulations Paul Paul Callus November 22, 2015 at 8:28 AM Thank you Nayda; your visit is appreciated:) All the best. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode November 21, 2015 at 2:37 AM You have done it well Paul and thank goodness you reached your aim. A very nice one, congrats on the win...hugs Paul Callus November 21, 2015 at 3:48 AM Love your cute comments, Kayode:) Thank you for your sincere support. All the best. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 20, 2015 at 11:28 PM Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb poetry Paul! Paul Callus November 21, 2015 at 3:50 AM Thank you Upma. Big congrats go to your high-flying entry, too:) Have a nice weekend. ~ Regards // paul

Skat A November 20, 2015 at 10:53 PM Paul, Congratulations on your wonderful OCTOBER win. I'm inviting you in hopes you enjoy my blog "I am the Pen" wrapping up October and its late winners :( Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Forever & Ever **SKAT** Paul Callus November 21, 2015 at 3:45 AM Thank you Skat. Will go pay your blog a visit. Hugs // paul

Beautiful Scars November 20, 2015 at 10:33 PM Congrats on your win! -LU Paul Callus November 21, 2015 at 3:34 AM Thank you Laura. Looking up I can also see your name on the winners' list:) Have a nice weekend. ~ Regards // paul

Debbie Guzzi October 23, 2015 at 7:43 PM Oh my my! Go Paul Light & Love Paul Callus October 24, 2015 at 6:54 PM Thank you for a lovely, welcome visit, Debbie! ~ Have a nice weekend! // paul

Laura Breidenthal October 20, 2015 at 10:31 AM Very interesting and riveting piece, Paul! Congrats! Always, Laura Paul Callus October 20, 2015 at 12:39 PM Thank you Laura. Somewhat different from my usual writes, but had to take up Casarah's challenge! ~ Regards // paul

Tammy Reams October 17, 2015 at 9:31 PM What a fantastic write Paul! Loved the leather dress! Congrats on your win. Paul Callus October 18, 2015 at 4:48 AM Thank you Tammy. Glad you enjoyed it! Have a lovely day. ~ Regards // paul

Eileen Manassian October 16, 2015 at 11:18 AM You knew your audience and you played up to her well. This has dominatrix fantasy fulfilled written all over it. I LOVED IT. Congrats on the win AND on POTD. Apassionata is thrilled. Paul Callus October 16, 2015 at 12:04 PM Thank you for coming back with this lovely feedback and congrats, Eileen:) Yes, I believe that it is important to know the persons we are dealing with; like that we can understand better their feelings and emotions when we read their poetry. It does make a difference! Appassionata is both supportive and generous:) Hugs // paul

Poet Destroyer A October 15, 2015 at 11:50 AM Paul, congrats on the win, LINDA Paul Callus October 15, 2015 at 3:06 PM Thank you Linda! I enjoyed your top winning entry:) Did I hear the cork popping!! hugs // paul

CayCay Godwin October 14, 2015 at 7:13 PM Oh, my gosh - how did I miss this! I love it, love it - you really whipped this one out in the most clever way! Very imaginative (is it?) ... CayCay Paul Callus October 15, 2015 at 3:48 PM I love your spontaneous reaction to this poem, CayCay:) So pleased that you like it. Yes, imagination played a major part in it! ~ Regards // paul

Kp Nunez October 14, 2015 at 11:36 AM :-))) I guess you saw the movie...there's too much shade of it here. Thermosensual bribe also won the POTD! Congrats on both wins, Paul! hugs! Paul Callus October 14, 2015 at 4:55 PM Sorry to disappoint you, Kim...but I have neither read the book nor seen the movie:)) But....I have read most of Casarah's poems, so I stand on firm ground:) Thank you for the double congrats. Hope you are not being overworked! Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux October 13, 2015 at 7:35 PM My personal favorite, congratulations. Paul Callus October 14, 2015 at 4:51 PM Thank you for liking, and for the congrats, Richard. All the best. // paul

Michael Tor October 13, 2015 at 4:03 AM Paul a favorite of mine for the contest. Congratulations for POTD and for this win, well deserving. Paul Callus October 14, 2015 at 4:43 PM I appreciate the double congrats and lovely comments, Michael. Thank you! // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 12, 2015 at 11:22 PM Awesome write n win Paul, it ended so well with call of ur name! Big congrats! Paul Callus October 14, 2015 at 4:35 PM Thank you, Upma. I kind of like that end line myself:) All the best. // paul

Alexis Y. October 12, 2015 at 10:56 PM Paul, Congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis Paul Callus October 14, 2015 at 4:27 PM Thank you, Alexis. When bribing a person we have to study well their strengths and weaknesses!:) // paul

Beautiful Scars October 12, 2015 at 8:23 PM Great job!! -LU Paul Callus October 14, 2015 at 4:21 PM Glad you enjoyed, Laura. Thank you for stopping by:) // paul

Carrie Richards October 12, 2015 at 6:34 PM You bribed in your own way, Paul....and it worked !!! Good job and big Congrats to you! Paul Callus October 14, 2015 at 3:49 PM Thank you Carrie; I enjoyed your winning entry, too. ~ Regards // paul

Skat A October 12, 2015 at 2:36 PM I love this one Paul, I see a double congrats on here. Congrats with your placement and POTD... SKAT Paul Callus October 14, 2015 at 3:45 PM Thank you for stopping by with double congrats, Skat! Glad you enjoyed it, too. Sweet regards ~ paul

Casarah Nance October 12, 2015 at 2:33 PM Poem of the day and on the winners list...geez Paul you are sure scoring with this write...You know me too well...should I be worried? lol. I loved this thanks !! Paul Callus October 14, 2015 at 3:43 PM Thank you Casarah; I'm as pleased as Punch to be placed high on your winning list:) Should you be worried? Definitely not:))) On the contrary...shows that your works are well read:) // paul

Eve Roper October 12, 2015 at 2:32 PM Wonderful write, Paul, and congratulations on Poem of the Day. Paul Callus October 14, 2015 at 3:39 PM Glad you like it, Eve; thank you! hugs // paul

Sandra Haight October 12, 2015 at 2:30 PM Back to congratulate you, Paul! I knew I would see this on the winner's list! Congrats. Sandra Paul Callus October 14, 2015 at 3:29 PM So nice of you to come back with congrats, Sandra. Thank you. // paul

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