Grouper Groper

GROUPER    GROPER

My god is this ocean getting crowded or what?
Time was I could swim here for days and spot
Not   even another Goliath Grouper
Now  I can’t even see - it’s like fog  -  a  pea-souper
Because of all these  pesky tiny fish.
Do they have no homes  to go to?   I wish !
It’s me or them  - so I’ll have to attack
I might get a few but it won’t scare off the whole pack.
But oh oh,  who’s this guy I see with the camera?
Looks like some semi-aquatic chimera
Man he’s sexy  - check those flippers  - woweee!
And the single big glassy eye  - Oh god, he reminds me of me!
Think I’m falling in love.  Better switch  to my  camera-smile.
This down-frown mouth probably ain’t  his style.
He’s no Grouper  - but he’s the best I’ve seen in a while


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Written for  Carolyn Devonshire's  Contest   "Attack!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 7:36 AM
Sydney, Great to see in the winner's circle. Congratulations on a swell poem. Agape, Moses
Fraser Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Many congratulations Sydney on your fine win in Carolyn's contest :)
Maverick Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 12:41 PM
Good to see your win in the contest of carolyn, Sydney.
Dufresne Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 5:37 AM
humorous take on the contest, Sydney and deserving of your win here. Congratulations to you
Mehta Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 3:08 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of carolyn, Sydney
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 1:51 PM
Congratulations on your so wonderfully deserved win in Carolyn's "Attack" contest Syd. Love Carol
Devonshire Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 1:45 PM
LOL Your whole take on the photo cracked me up, Syd. "Man he's sexy...And the single big glassy eye." Very funny, Syd. The competition was amazing and I judged blindly so I was delighted to see you on the winners' list. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Beck Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Thanks for all your kind comments and support...and i'm glad to see you back from the Dry Tortugas - did you catch any big one? I ve been reading Hemingway OLDMANNDSEA AGAIN - brilliant writing....with my very best wishes Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 1:35 PM
Funny and cute. Carolyn must have been amused. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 8:03 AM
what a creatie shift! stunning stufffff, syd!! go for the win while i cure my gas pains, lol... :) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
totally unique and AWESOME. I love this one.
Gorelick Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 7:25 PM
Good one...! Im still laughing. BG
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