GRINNING EYES

For Timothy Lee
his grin melted me his blue eyes captivated ~ my love was heart cuffed His manly presence shook me to my knees. His boldness sent my flesh nerves on spree. I shall always hold tight his first bold words, "You love me, you just do not know it yet." I have waited a fragile lifetime. I have dreamed beyond infinite dreams. He was frequently at friends of mine. Always intent on his flirting scheme, He pursued me with a steady gleam. Now our love is a fulfilling theme.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 7:23 PM
CayCay, Congratulations on your "Poet's Dozen 2: First date" WIN!!! Love ~ LINDA ~
Haight Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Love reading 'bout your lovin' CayCay! Nicely done and with a happy ending! Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Crazy bout your lovin, CayCay. Well done.
Johnson Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 6:22 PM
A successful first date and win. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 5:46 PM
I gotta go see the placement you got. Anyway, I can see it won, and deservedly so. Congrats, my friend. I finished my school work and now I can run to the store. I've developed a touch of a cold!
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 5:46 PM
I gotta go see the placement you got. Anyway, I can see it won, and deservedly so. Congrats, my friend. I finished my school work and now I can run to the store. I've developed a touch of a cold!
Scars Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:12 PM
Awww CayCay, very sweet :) "His manly presence shook me to my knees. His boldness saw my flesh nerves start to seize." Love this, my fav verse..Congrats on your placement!! :)-luloo *smiles*
A  Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:41 PM
CayCay, Congrats on your win. SKAT
Cwiak Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 2:36 PM
A wonderful tribute to the one who rocked your core. It just shows that there can be love at first sight, which I wish I had the chance to experience. Great write, CayCay. Good luck in the contest!
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January 8, 2016 at 1:03 AM
great write....a 7
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January 6, 2016 at 8:50 PM
This is SO CUTE< CayCAY. I am proud to be the first to leave a comment here. I also love the cute title. The part where you said you didn't know you loved him yet. That was special!! Hope you are doing ok, sweetie. I'm off here now. Time to make dinner.
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