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Grim Side of Intransigence

As taut breezes whip on a chilled evening, I find her standing upright---relentless firm murmuring vexedly which drain all exchanges beyond amity. My warm glances try to uncover how the pain of disorder all began : Yet how unbending, even obstinate her will, all those grates of words so stern that I and kin endure the torment of our lacerated feelings: O dear sister, it is hard to reconcile your two opposing worlds-- the quarrel of your manic storms at its peak while tangy air twirls outside the garden like a hearth's need for clarity…we keep our tones hushed and wait, wait until a clear energy releases this implacable mind from blinding yet another evening of reality: Twilight draws near…she slips into oblivion, peaceful, not knowing this part of her masked entity holds her enslaved..again. 7/20/2019 John Hamilton’s Intransigence Contest
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Proxenos Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 1:30 PM
Hi , Bipolar is a sad disease but more and more people are being diagnosed with it. You deserve this wonderful win for such a sympathetic, exquisite write. Congratulations dear friend, another wonderful gem from your pen. Hugs Jenn.
Michael Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations nette...This is life...and you wrote it well...
Mcgee Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 6:32 PM
Back to say Congrats on your podium win. Nicely done.
Hamilton Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 4:43 PM
This one strikes home like you may not remember, but if you do, thanks for this amazing write, compassion that one could only know by seeing it personally how it affects a loved one. Masterful writing Nette, congrats on a shared top win!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 7:36 AM
This sounds like a complicated relationship. Fortunate for her you are a compassionate soul. Hugs Rick.
Lawless Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Ah, Nette,, an exquisitely written poem to describe the torture of an horrific "disorder"
Mcgee Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Heartfelt write about such a difficult problem in so many peoples lives. I've known it well myself through those in my life. Good luck in the contest!
One Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 5:40 AM
You really know how to take a reader into your poem and I've lost superlatives for your vocabulary....very deep poetry...
Cunningham Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 4:10 AM
We take so much for granted but many suffer in silence. Well written nette. Tom
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