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Grieving Over Leaving

I was ever thinking of you So my guts I could renew We were mentally intimate Both were under love-climate Your memory was significant Sending in life positive current Your liking was implied When for love I applied But, it was not a final reply Openly you did not supply We both were damn young By both love song was sung From me when you departed By memories I was comforted Gradually time punctually vanished Remembrance never diminished Your true love and affection healed To God also I prayerfully appealed When deep dejection I owned Your absence I greatly atoned If you were very, very near You would have stopped tear Everything is now too late We got separated by fate. mvvenkataraman SEARCH mvvenkataraman IN GOOGLE OR YAHOO

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Date: 9/15/2011 10:41:00 AM
Hope and then loss so eloquently expressed in this sorrowful verse. I feel the pain too.
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Date: 9/13/2011 2:37:00 PM
Enjoyed reading today MV. Love,Carol
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