Grieving Autumn

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Lost in grieving autumn were worn out words that trickled down like rain then fell like stones I listen harder now and they are heard But now the voice just asks to be alone! __________________________________________________ Inspired by Contest: "Visual of a Verso" Sponsored by Nette Onclaud 8/20/15 By Carrie Richards

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Skat A

Date: 9/1/2015 11:44:00 PM

Nice win.... SKAT

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/31/2015 8:13:00 AM

Autumn metaphor never crossed my mine until I read your poem, it's a natural fit, for autumn brings an ending followed by emptiness..congratulations for your win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/30/2015 10:35:00 PM

Very wonderful verse Carrie! Congrats on awesome win!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/30/2015 6:11:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2015 10:20:00 PM

I love how you interpreted the pictures and put your thoughts into this interesting rhyme pattern. WEll done, Carrie. You too saw the message as one of grief! Congrats.

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/22/2015 7:55:00 PM

Love this, Carrie; beautiful interpretation of the prompts. I always enjoy your writing. Thanks for stopping by.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/21/2015 2:22:00 AM

beautiful interpretation of the visuals - I am still working on it I find the images so sad and my muse is in happy mood:-) hugs jan xx