Grey Mottled Pastiche

A maze of tall ascending fingers pierce the sky
Prominent and conceived as seeds
In someone's fertile mind
Crowded together packed in vertical line
That overshadow the pavement below.

Temples of finance and commerce
Amassed in concrete and reflective glass
As tiny moving dots like ants scurry and hurry below
Metal boxes of all shapes and colours
In the city like a river stop and flow.

A array of stores billboards and eye catching signs
Forming linear line
The pavement wet with rain makes them shine.

The hustle and bustle of traffic 
Horns And police sirens make a awful din
But just normal and ignored by the residents and crowds 
That tread the pavement and reside within 
The collage of busy hectic city life 
For the lucky and affluent a shoppers paradise
But for the homeless sleeping rough
On the cold concrete
Life is tough.



Peter Dome.Copyright.2015. May.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 4:33 PM
such stark intense imagery - thankfully here on the Island we do not see people sleeping rough but I have seen it in the Uk and it is a sorry sight to behold:-( Hugs Jan xx
Dome Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 5:51 AM
Thank you Jan. countless thousands of people go unseen around the world. many living underground in sewers, and like in Vegas. storm drains. Police in some countries seek them out and kill them. even pouring gasoline. in and setting it alight. one young 9 year old girl was burned to death thank you. Pete.
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May 24, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Peter, well this has great imagery, However, life is tough never enough to make the world a better place to sleep. Forever **SKAT**
Dome Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 5:54 AM
Hi Skat. so true my friend. life is tough, just got to make the most of it. I feel so lucky to have a roof over my head. and have enough wan so many people have nothing. Thank you so much for you're kindness and encouragement. best wishes. Pete.
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