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Greif

Grief The lose the passing on No more will I hear there song Funeral arrangements must be made The mind in a total haze A few tears are shied going to bed Nothing yet has kicked in No matter how young or old The news we do not want to be told A week has gone and so has everyone My mind has space to grief at my pace There is nothing easy in my day Grief smothers my normal way There is no time limit to how I feel Maybe I will never heal

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Date: 5/28/2017 7:18:00 AM
It s really a heart touching poem but every type of grief is being heal by the passage of time,so took less time while others can took years but their one day will come when you ll totally forget about it only a memory would be left
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Niall Fulham
Date: 5/28/2017 10:27:00 AM
Hi Faraz , nice to meet , thank you for your comment much apre :)))
Date: 5/6/2017 4:07:00 PM
Yes, that's the way it feels most often. Nice write. Glad you liked my Little Black Bird. I wrote it back in 2012 :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 5/6/2017 4:50:00 PM
Hi Debbie , thanks for comment , I often envy birds being able to see all and just fly :))) hugs flying your way :))
Date: 4/29/2017 1:58:00 AM
Oh WOW!! I understand how you feel!! Great right Niall!! I pray everything is getting a little better day by day!! Hugs from Texas!
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/29/2017 3:02:00 AM
Hi Misty, thanks for comment , time is the only healer :))) hugs from Ireland
Date: 4/24/2017 8:11:00 PM
One day you will heal
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/25/2017 7:03:00 AM
Hi Marina , thank you for comment means alot :)) hugs
Date: 4/22/2017 4:36:00 PM
Sending you hugs Nail :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/22/2017 5:17:00 PM
Hi Akkina, thanks for comment :)) hugs :))
Date: 4/22/2017 1:30:00 PM
Hello Niall, I have just read your griving poem. So I understand what you said.Hugs from Canada.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/22/2017 2:12:00 PM
Hi Darlene, Hugs:))
Date: 4/20/2017 1:54:00 PM
I enjoy you use of emotions in this poem. And losing someone you care about is really hard. Stay strong!!! It gets better. :)
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Elissa Quigley
Date: 4/20/2017 4:22:00 PM
No problem, and if there is any way for me to help, please tell me and I'll do my best!! ~Hugs from USA
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/20/2017 3:45:00 PM
Hi Elisse , thanks for the caring comment:)))
Date: 4/20/2017 12:11:00 PM
- Grief takes a long time to heal - A sad poem, great written Niall - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 4/20/2017 12:16:00 PM
Hi Anne, thanks for comment it is a petty we are born to die:)))

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