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Greet the Dawn Nk

over the sky sun opens his third eye red tint spreads clouds float high- fluffy white. birds fly high, feast to the eye. one can feel the calm sibilance, of a blue tranquil lake, making the mind at peace. the world stirs back to life- time to wake up from ease. wind flies on filmy wings, the brown leaves, they release. greet the day dawning in silence! Sept.15.2022 ~Placed Second~ Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest Sponsor- Charles Messina

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/19/2022 9:45:00 AM

Beautiful scene painting in, Greet the Dawn. "sun opens his third eye" - like greatly enlightened one or like Lord Shiva. Great connection. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/19/2022 6:29:00 AM

Back with congratulations on a well-deserved win with your lovely poem. Blessings

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/19/2022 5:00:00 AM

Every new day's dawning is different, and you have described a lovely one. Congratulations on being on the winners' list. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Charles Messina

Date: 10/18/2022 3:42:00 PM

So lovely, Valsa. Great job with this difficult form. Congratulations on your win in my contest. ~Charlie

Valsa George
Date: 10/18/2022 10:02:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Charlie for picking up my poem for a win

Bill Baker

Date: 9/23/2022 1:29:00 PM

You did well, Valsa. Very creative new Haiku form. Good message also, my friend. Good luck! Hugs, Bill

Arlo Parker

Date: 9/19/2022 1:28:00 AM

Best of luck n the (tres difficult) contest. :o)

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/17/2022 7:40:00 AM

The pictures of the morning were quite enjoyable to look at in your magnific words. Valsa, you never fail to wow with the quality of your performance.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2022 7:40:00 PM

wow, Valsa. That is gorgeous writing. I really like it!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2022 7:40:00 PM

wow, Valsa. That is gorgeous writing. I really like it!!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/15/2022 12:34:00 PM

Nicely done Valsa - Brava! Linda

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/15/2022 7:02:00 AM

Strange haiku invented by my friend Charles Messina. I loved the imagery and hope for a high placement.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/15/2022 6:39:00 AM

Much enjoyed the images of dawning. Well executed, as always, Valsa. Best to you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/15/2022 2:21:00 AM

You captured the dawn well Valsa, my favourite time of day as the earth wakes from its slumber. Best of luck in the contest, greetings from Wales. Tom