Valsa George Poet Haiku

Greet the Dawn Nk

over the sky
sun opens
his third eye
red tint spreads
clouds float high-
fluffy white.
birds fly high,
feast to the eye.

one can feel the calm sibilance,
of a blue tranquil lake,
making the mind at peace.
the world stirs back to life-
time to wake up from ease.
wind flies on filmy wings,
the brown leaves, they release.
greet the day dawning in silence!

Sept.15.2022

~Placed Second~

Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Charles Messina

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Christuraj Alex October 19, 2022 at 9:45 AM Beautiful scene painting in, Greet the Dawn. "sun opens his third eye" - like greatly enlightened one or like Lord Shiva. Great connection. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet October 19, 2022 at 6:29 AM Back with congratulations on a well-deserved win with your lovely poem. Blessings

Sara Kendrick October 19, 2022 at 5:00 AM Every new day's dawning is different, and you have described a lovely one. Congratulations on being on the winners' list. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Charles Messina October 18, 2022 at 3:42 PM So lovely, Valsa. Great job with this difficult form. Congratulations on your win in my contest. ~Charlie Valsa George October 18, 2022 at 10:02 PM Thanks a lot dear Charlie for picking up my poem for a win

Bill Baker September 23, 2022 at 1:29 PM You did well, Valsa. Very creative new Haiku form. Good message also, my friend. Good luck! Hugs, Bill

Arlo Parker September 19, 2022 at 1:28 AM Best of luck n the (tres difficult) contest. :o)

Sotto Poet September 17, 2022 at 7:40 AM The pictures of the morning were quite enjoyable to look at in your magnific words. Valsa, you never fail to wow with the quality of your performance.

Andrea Dietrich September 16, 2022 at 7:40 PM wow, Valsa. That is gorgeous writing. I really like it!!

Andrea Dietrich September 16, 2022 at 7:40 PM wow, Valsa. That is gorgeous writing. I really like it!!

Linda Alice Fowler September 15, 2022 at 12:34 PM Nicely done Valsa - Brava! Linda

Victor Buhagiar September 15, 2022 at 7:02 AM Strange haiku invented by my friend Charles Messina. I loved the imagery and hope for a high placement.

Vijay Pandit September 15, 2022 at 6:39 AM Much enjoyed the images of dawning. Well executed, as always, Valsa. Best to you.

Tom Cunningham September 15, 2022 at 2:21 AM You captured the dawn well Valsa, my favourite time of day as the earth wakes from its slumber. Best of luck in the contest, greetings from Wales. Tom