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Greet Me In Our Old Jalopy

Each crescent moon rewinds time’s notes to sweep me back to our blessed haven where long has stayed my peaked essence. I’d love to be back in our cozy cabin where so much couple magic happened. You and I and all our shared yesterday seconds were love expressed while money distressed and both such ways were my life’s best days. We could barely afford a potty when on our first anniversary you wrapped a Scottie puppy inside an old jalopy that was red bow capped. A car some might call shoddy mapped our young love in freedom’s feelings of happy. Tonight’s moon knows our seventieth anniversary has just come and agrees that when my life is done you’ll greet me with Scottie in our old jalopy. Soon, my love, please come bind me in eternal love; then the moon will shine rays of freedom’s happy. ... CayCay July 26, 2019

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Date: 7/30/2019 1:08:00 PM
Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..
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Date: 7/30/2019 7:02:00 PM
You left me especially sweet comments, Funom, and I feel blessed to have them, thank you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 7/28/2019 12:44:00 PM
Love the romantic memories shared CayCay
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Date: 7/28/2019 7:03:00 AM
Very nice CayCay. Love the story. Congratulations...:) Hugs
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Date: 7/27/2019 11:42:00 PM
Congratulations on getting on his short list CayCay. I was hoping this would do well. xxoo
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Date: 7/27/2019 9:32:00 PM
Lovely, CayCay. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/27/2019 6:29:00 PM
Nice one! CayCay! Great Win
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Date: 7/27/2019 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations, CayCay!
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Date: 7/27/2019 3:53:00 PM
I would have loved a Scottie in an old jalopy too. Happy memories so deserving of a win!
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Date: 7/27/2019 3:45:00 PM
CayCay, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 7/27/2019 3:31:00 PM
You are so talented CayCay and your poems flow like a cascading waterfall,so naturally,never stressed and always with such candid imagination. Love and hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 7/27/2019 10:45:00 AM
CayCay, this is a sweet poem of remembrance that touches the heart. I love the phrase "endless feelings of freedom's happy." A Fav Poem for me. ~Mark
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Date: 7/26/2019 9:20:00 PM
A brilliant entry for the contest Caycay. I loved the colorful imagery. I hope this is a top winner! xxoo
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Date: 7/26/2019 12:57:00 PM
True delight in a well penned poem Pamagiota
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Date: 7/26/2019 2:12:00 AM
Tenderly romantic writing that touches the core of one's heart dear, CayCay. Wish you the best outcome,! Poetic Hugs
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