Greenville, Mississippi - 1957

A dirty old sidewalk
runs in front of grandma's house
with bumps and cracks from the roots
of ancient white-oak

Armed with cane poles and sack lunches
crickets and freshly dug earth worms
we meander down to the levee
barefoot in careless summers

One low spot beneath
a straggly Chinaberry
filled with pitch-black delta dirt
washed in by summer rains
We shuffle through and dig down
cooling our toes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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White Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 12:47 AM
Beautiful, the images in my mind of where you are and were. Congratulations :)
Smith Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 10:38 AM
Congratulations Tim. :)
Sands Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations :)
A  Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 3:46 PM
Let's enjoy them together
Ryerson Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 4:25 PM
I did a re-write of this named 'I Recall'
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July 27, 2013 at 5:44 AM
Tim a perfect summer day. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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July 25, 2013 at 9:55 PM
hello, TIM the poem is hot and Awesome... congrats with your summer time poem...love Linda
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July 25, 2013 at 12:50 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Tim xx
Bauer Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 1:46 PM
so easy to picture, especially the last two lines. congratulations!
A  Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 1:31 PM
Hi Tim, congratulations :-), a lovely gift of a poem. Thank you for the support my contest. Stop by and enjoy my blog: (A Lavender Day-- summer contest) winners. Have yourself an awesome day. LUV ~SKAT
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February 15, 2013 at 11:06 PM
oh my this is one of the best yet. also I see it won in one of Constance's contests long ago. Those were the days, right ? when Constance was inspiring us with her beautiful contests. I saw you have many senryu back here in these first pages as well. Gotta get to those one day. Luv,Andrea
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October 23, 2009 at 4:54 AM
Congratulations, Tim, on your success in Constance’s “A Walk to Remember” contest with this nostalgic poem. It's easy to see why you placed. Very nice. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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October 18, 2009 at 12:35 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest! ~Trudy~
Strand Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 2:43 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest Tim.Rgds Brian
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October 16, 2009 at 8:44 PM
A MASTERPIECE!!!! . Love, Lainie
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October 16, 2009 at 5:36 PM
I loved this one first time I read it, and still a winner in my book! ~Congratulations Tim!! ~Love, Carrie
Brown Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 3:11 PM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest Tim. Love, Carol
Sheart Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 3:07 PM
Hi Tim, congrats on your win! Love Light Truth Patricia
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October 16, 2009 at 2:45 PM
Tim, congratulations on your success in the contest...Raul
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October 11, 2009 at 1:42 PM
Delightful Choka Tim >> James
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October 8, 2009 at 7:12 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 8:52 AM
I am sure I missed so many amazing poems this past weekend. I enjoyed reading yours today Tim. Thank you for sharing it. Wishing you the best in Constance's contest. Love, Carol
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October 5, 2009 at 4:19 AM
Good luck in the contest. Sounds like children having fun. Keep writing. Sara
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October 4, 2009 at 5:16 PM
Great submission to the contest, Tim! There are sidewalks in my neighborhood like this. And, to answer your question, yes...I am irresistably drawn to the karaoke mic many a Saturday night! :o)
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October 4, 2009 at 4:54 PM
Carolyn - Greenville, MS...on the mighty Mississippi River; my birthplace and where I spent many wonderful childhood summers! As always thanks for your kind and encouraging comments my friend - Tim
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October 4, 2009 at 2:57 PM
yes I remember loving MUD! I have never seen New Oreleans or Loisiana I'd love to visit the bayou and be at a cajun party! Light & Love
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