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Green, Tobacco Chewing Catepillar

I met a green horned tobacco chewing catepillar Spitting was his Passion all day. The cool night gives hiding to HIS voracious appetite Days are for napping THE heat away. Fall GIVES HIDING TO HIS hybernation ***In spring he emerges into a brown moth that bumps into the windows at night and scares the pants off of me.

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Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 9/26/2010 2:19:00 AM

Hi Doris.This was great fun to read,I laughed out loud at the very last line,I didn,t see it coming.By the way thank you for your comments on my first written with empathy from friends not my own experience I'm happy to say.I look forward to more of your poems to enjoy. luv June.

Liz Walsh

Date: 9/17/2010 11:17:00 AM

Wonderful Doris - no I wasn't in an orphanage - I was lucky to have a very privileged upbringing but there was what we called A County Home - Magdalen Laundry - in the town where I was reared - where young girls who were pregnent outside marriage were literally incarcerated. Their children - many of them were sent to America to be adopted. Sometimes the mothers were kept for their whole lives in these laundries, unpaid and made to feel that they were doomed because of their sins.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/16/2010 4:15:00 PM

Those are some ugly creatures..They can eat up a tomato plant in a day or two..Glad that you looked this one up and gave us some info..Mom

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2010 12:14:00 AM

Hey, this was very interesting, Doris. And I can see why your teacher liked your humor. I too did a project in English in H.S. I wrote a book of quatrains and I'd give anything to have it back. the dang teacher kept it ALL. LUv, Andrea

Linda Milgate

Date: 9/15/2010 2:44:00 PM

Really cute depiction of a nasty beast. Wasn't a good year for vegetable gardens in my area. We had a terrible fire not far, thus my sad poem. Knew the area. Luckily no one I knew was caught. Poem can help process. Thanks for your kind remarks. Linda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2010 2:22:00 PM

Must be similar to the cortezone shots I used to get in my ankle regularly after breaking it badly playing football with the guys a few years ago... glad its over and she is resting ... takes time to get into the system and start doing its job luv.. send her my best..luv..and Ron's too..his Dad has a bad back...

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/15/2010 1:45:00 PM

this bad bug eats tomato plants, egg plants, tobacco, peppers and anything in that family...they will eat it so fast it will make your head spin.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2010 1:08:00 PM

What a great description and visual Doris.. and thankxxx for the footnote.. interesting piece ..light and educational.. hope all is well with Mom today..please let me know luv..in our prayers...constantly..luv.. to answer your question.. yes ..still on honeymoon cloud.. in all its 18 years of LUV...and now almost a month of being married ... awesome..so far... luv the ride and waking up to him every day...

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/15/2010 9:06:00 AM

Great and funny write, Doris! Yes, I also remember "Summersby", Gere and Foster are such great actors!!! ....Gert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/15/2010 7:58:00 AM

Great poem, Doris. It reminded me of the caterpillars that destroyed the tobacco crop in the movie Summersby with Richard Gere and Jodie Foster. Thank goodness they hibernate during the winter months! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/15/2010 7:12:00 AM

Good morning Doris, how are you ,, about your poem,, oi!! They are oowey! not chewy! lol,, had to smile at the end of your words,..p.d.