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Green Field Of The Elves

Pointed like fingers At heaven; ears twitching in Song— rise of a voice At dawn, torn within; Footsteps go; clovers after— A kiss on bled palm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 7/7/2023 3:53:00 PM
Your Haikus show us the understanding of nature and how nature resonates with your soul. Thanks for sharing your feeling with us through your poetry, Paige. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 7/7/2023 5:42:00 AM
So interesting: Footsteps go; clovers after
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Date: 7/6/2023 2:57:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku! It carries a mystical quality to it. Paige
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Date: 7/5/2023 11:11:00 PM
A magical write Paige! Debx
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Date: 6/30/2023 10:02:00 AM
Excellent haikus. Panagiota
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Date: 6/30/2023 7:07:00 AM
Hi Paige, I enjoyed the power of this haiku, so full and descriptive and yet so succinct. I guess that is the art of haiku poems.
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Date: 6/29/2023 11:58:00 PM
wonderful sensitivity with nature
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Date: 6/29/2023 8:46:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku ! It has a magical touch .
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Date: 6/29/2023 6:35:00 PM
Wonderful, Paige!
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Date: 6/29/2023 6:04:00 PM
a mystical magical poem paige, it reminded me of a fave book from my childhood - the Elves and the Shoemaker! hugs Hab xx
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