Green Eyes

Emeralds daggers carved out both my eyes 
Leaving me blind, just enough to escape the lies 
‘I wanna be yours’ recites over and over in my mind 
If I looked in yours would it be love I find?

Constant appraisal appears to be your biggest flaw 
You, your vanity and I, entangled in this ménage a tois 
But I cannot describe this feeling when I look at you
A mix of love and hate, the old saying been said to a fair few 

Those eyes melt me as if I was a sugar cube to your coffee 
Your woeful ballads echo through my slumber ever solemnly 
Haunt me in my dreams, awake with the feel of heavy hearted 
Each night I lay there thinking will we finish what we started
My head asks me to leave but my heart protest
That I would pick you above all the rest 
The first glance I knew from the very start 
That it would be you and I, till death do us part
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bateman Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 9:44 AM
Faith, A most compelling write here. The descriptiveness of your words and your imagery make your narrative all the more powerful with the intent of your message. Very well-done, and I do agree with David Meade (below) that " . . . deep is the passion where you write from . . . ." Your are good at describing circumstances that leave room for the reader to ponder the situation you're writing about. Most Brilliant!! Best Always, Gary
Smith Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:13 AM
Make sure he is not superficial or he will leave for the next best thing....good luck Tim
Meade Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:36 PM
You are on a roll . . . . deep is the passion where you write from . . . . well done.
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November 28, 2014 at 4:01 PM
Thank you David
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