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Green Eyes

Emeralds daggers carved out both my eyes Leaving me blind, just enough to escape the lies ‘I wanna be yours’ recites over and over in my mind If I looked in yours would it be love I find? Constant appraisal appears to be your biggest flaw You, your vanity and I, entangled in this ménage a tois But I cannot describe this feeling when I look at you A mix of love and hate, the old saying been said to a fair few Those eyes melt me as if I was a sugar cube to your coffee Your woeful ballads echo through my slumber ever solemnly Haunt me in my dreams, awake with the feel of heavy hearted Each night I lay there thinking will we finish what we started My head asks me to leave but my heart protest That I would pick you above all the rest The first glance I knew from the very start That it would be you and I, till death do us part

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/7/2014 9:44:00 AM
Faith, A most compelling write here. The descriptiveness of your words and your imagery make your narrative all the more powerful with the intent of your message. Very well-done, and I do agree with David Meade (below) that " . . . deep is the passion where you write from . . . ." Your are good at describing circumstances that leave room for the reader to ponder the situation you're writing about. Most Brilliant!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 11/29/2014 6:13:00 AM
Make sure he is not superficial or he will leave for the next best thing....good luck Tim
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Date: 11/28/2014 12:36:00 PM
You are on a roll . . . . deep is the passion where you write from . . . . well done.
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Faith Carmichael
Date: 11/28/2014 4:01:00 PM
Thank you David

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