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28.09.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Gnarled, Graceful, Green -
 Words Poetry Contest
    Sponsored by: Constance La France 

1st place in the contest

- Green -

                           Gorgeous golden arches dance at night
                           Romantic shy trembling tatting
                           Esoteric sweetness is woven in the loom
                           Endless lifted from dust in the windowsill
                           Northern lights - green gemstones
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Date: 10/8/2023 11:36:00 PM
Anne-Lise, excellent poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the image, Constance
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Date: 10/3/2023 9:29:00 PM
This is so beautiful.... ! A perfect acrostic clothed in emerald sheen. The image and the description both are superb. I am sure this will be placed high. All the best dear Anne....! Love and hugs!
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Date: 10/9/2023 2:20:00 AM
- Much appreciate your visit and comments Valsa, many thanks :) - hugs
Date: 10/2/2023 6:25:00 PM
A superb Acrostic. Strong imagery. It should place exceptionally well in the contest. Congratulations on posting a stellar write! Brian
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Date: 10/9/2023 2:20:00 AM
- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Brian :) - hugs
Date: 10/1/2023 8:04:00 AM
Oh wow i love this acrostic! Northern lights, is one on my bucket list, i would really love to see. So i close my eyes imagine as i read your words “ golden arches dance at night” it must be easy for you to go catch them? Have u seen them ever? Ah Love this one! A fave! Green gemstone this is
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Date: 10/2/2023 2:33:00 AM
- Much appreciate your visit,comments and fave, many thanks, Ink :) - Yes, I have seen it :) - hugs
Date: 10/1/2023 5:38:00 AM
Anne=Lise, wonderful Acrostic and perfect photograph Hugs ~Warren
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:03:00 AM
- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Warren :) - hugs
Date: 9/30/2023 4:51:00 PM
I would love to see that dance :)
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:03:00 AM
- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Kim :) - hugs
Date: 9/30/2023 3:09:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, This is just lovely. It’s a great entry for the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:03:00 AM
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Date: 9/30/2023 4:08:00 AM
Such a nice acrostic for the theme word 'Green' dear Anne. You are so lucky for having watched Northern lights. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs...~ Ani
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:03:00 AM
- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Ani :) - hugs
Date: 9/30/2023 3:19:00 AM
Absolutely enchanting. Thanks for the stunning photo and wonderful imagery of your acrostic. It seems surreal.
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:02:00 AM
- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Nancy :) - hugs
Date: 9/29/2023 3:17:00 PM
Beautiful! Tatting helps make visual this fine poem, knowing the level of difficulty with endless hours that goes into such intricate, mystical design. Great read!
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:02:00 AM
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Date: 9/29/2023 11:31:00 AM
Colorful insight into Northern lights. The reference to "Golden arches", made me think initially that this poem is about MacDonald Hamburger chain.
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:02:00 AM
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Date: 9/29/2023 6:13:00 AM
Your words bring forth the green from your photo. Perfectly described, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:01:00 AM
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Date: 9/29/2023 2:59:00 AM
My dear Anne Lise, the best of the best. How I wish I was younger and see the Northern lights. Too sick now.
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:01:00 AM
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Date: 9/28/2023 3:49:00 PM
Great imagery my friend
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:01:00 AM
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Date: 9/28/2023 3:05:00 PM
Very cool. I want to do green too!
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:01:00 AM
- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Andrea :) - hugs
Date: 9/28/2023 2:01:00 PM
Anne-Lise you have painted a gorgeous tableau with multiple shades and colors with your bright words. My very best wishes of a great contest win.
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:00:00 AM
- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Las :) - hugs
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