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Green-Eyed Monster

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Indubitably there is one emotion By the time I feel its first nettle I am at the point of explosion It is already too late to settle I become immediately apoplectic Before the green-eyed monster Is validated as authentic Thus exaggerating it asunder I find this is so flabbergasting My face turns red and I glower Jealousy for me is most suggesting That my sanity has been devoured May 5, 2018

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/22/2018 11:52:00 AM

I love this well-crafted piece because each of us gets bitten by jealousy at one time or another - whether we think someone else has it all, more beauty, more intelligence, more wealth, better health, etc. Some people like to think that they are immune to the tune of the Green-eyed Monster - but at some point we all succumb to it when it raises its ugly head:-)! Excellent piece that I enjoyed reading! Hugs. Pandita

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/22/2018 10:09:00 PM

Thank you. It is such an awful feeling. :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/5/2018 10:08:00 PM

Susan, your description of jealousy is spot-on--so descriptive! Janice

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/5/2018 10:39:00 PM

Thanks, Janice.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/5/2018 7:17:00 PM

you sure rock with this powerful poem Susan and folks will probably be jealous if its a contest winner lol - love the pic too its stunning! hugs jan xx

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/5/2018 9:44:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Appreciate your input always.

Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly

Date: 5/5/2018 4:12:00 PM

Ooh, the green eyed monster, Susan, penned well. Jealousy is 'inverted admiration'. No one is ever jealous or envious of something bad or worthless. Inspired trumps coveting what's desired. All the best in the contest! :) ~ Artsie

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/5/2018 4:36:00 PM

Thanks Artsie. I like that.

David Welch

Date: 5/5/2018 2:39:00 PM

Nice write.

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/5/2018 3:32:00 PM

Thanks David.

Lin Lane

Date: 5/5/2018 10:28:00 AM

Well done, Susan. Jealousy is such a wasted emotional monster, but hard to tame.

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/5/2018 1:55:00 PM

Thank you! Yes it is.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/5/2018 8:15:00 AM

Hi Susan, This is a good entry for the contest theme. We all know how it feels to be plagued with jealousy. Its such an intense emotion. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. PS, Congratulations on becoming a lifetime member. You are an amazing poet:-) Alexis

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/5/2018 1:53:00 PM

Thanks so much! A lovely comment. I'm fairly new at poetry. There are so many awesome poets here, including you. I'm learning so much about types, etc. I like challenges too. :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/5/2018 8:00:00 AM

Well done, Susan, I envy those who seem to never be bitten by that green monster Good Luck xxoo

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/5/2018 1:49:00 PM

Surely everyone has one time or another. Thank you. :)

Roy Pett

Date: 5/5/2018 5:32:00 AM

Excellent poem Susan, jealously is such a bad emotion for the person feeling it and for those it’s aimed at, so well written, good luck in contest. :)

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/5/2018 1:48:00 PM

Thanks Roy! Been a long time since I felt it but it was awful when I did.