Greater Depths of Life

A springboard on the deep end ~ I dove into the greater depths of life

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John Lawless

Date: 6/13/2023 7:18:00 PM

NO RUNNING, JUMPING, OR DIVING FROM THE BALCONY......sign in the YMCA on Huntington Ave in Boston...

Lin Lane
Date: 6/13/2023 7:47:00 PM

LOL John. My diving board is not on the grand scale of the Y. Taking a dip certainly is called for these days since with the heat index this week, it's about 107.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2023 12:56:00 PM

Love this, and gosh is a monoku contest going on because I am seeing a number of them today!!!

Lin Lane
Date: 6/13/2023 1:21:00 PM

You’re not missing a contest. David has instilled a love for them in me. Lol Thanks, Andrea.

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/13/2023 11:03:00 AM

Meaningful and profound Monoku Lin, I think the deep end is the one place that poets should not avoid, and you certainly are not afraid to go there, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 6/13/2023 11:48:00 AM

Thank you, David. Some risks in life are worth taking and it’s not always a simple task to know which ones are, so… take a plunge.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/13/2023 9:13:00 AM

Lin, your Monoku is exquisitely crafted. With eloquence, you capture the metaphor of a springboard propelling one into the depths of life.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/13/2023 9:41:00 AM

Why thanks so much for your gentle thoughts, Lasaad. I'm grateful the pool has fathoms of depth.