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Soaring bald eagle - A lone bald eagle soaring over the...Just a thought when I saw one lone buzzard flying on the currents into the clouds..Sara
great trepidation vulture soars on wind currents.. ominous dark clouds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/29/2012 6:26:00 AM
Three sentences that sent chills down my spine. Excellent as usual
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Date: 2/28/2012 8:34:00 PM
I LIKES this one filled with foreboding!! As for junk food junkie. that is how I was in my youth, Sara. I wish I could still eat that way and get away with it. But I watch what I eat now, always making sure to get one of my "bad foods" in from time to time!!
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Date: 2/28/2012 7:32:00 PM
an eerie presence with the vulture hovering Sara but so beautifully depicted by your grand words luv..
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Date: 2/28/2012 4:45:00 PM
Dark but still poetic.
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Date: 2/28/2012 2:08:00 PM
This is really a gloomy poem! I love how you used the vulture to "soar(s) on wind current(s)"! Very powerful line! And especially powerful is your juxtaposition! I love your whole poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/28/2012 1:41:00 PM
Lovely atmospheric haiku here, Sara. I've never seen a vulture but I like watching a buzzard every morning when a lady leaves cat food for it.
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Date: 2/28/2012 9:28:00 AM
good morning Sara, sound epic... a nice dark imagery haiku..enjoyed..pd
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Date: 2/28/2012 8:37:00 AM
You paint with words here, Sara. wonderful poem. harry
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