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Soaring bald eagle - A lone bald eagle soaring over the...

Just a thought when I saw one lone buzzard flying on the currents into the clouds..Sara

Great Trepidation

great trepidation
 vulture soars on wind currents..
 ominous dark clouds

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Anthony Nutter

February 29, 2012 at 6:26 AM

Three sentences that sent chills down my spine. Excellent as usual

Andrea Dietrich

February 28, 2012 at 8:34 PM

I LIKES this one filled with foreboding!! As for junk food junkie. that is how I was in my youth, Sara. I wish I could still eat that way and get away with it. But I watch what I eat now, always making sure to get one of my "bad foods" in from time to time!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 28, 2012 at 7:32 PM

an eerie presence with the vulture hovering Sara but so beautifully depicted by your grand words luv..

Kevin Clark

February 28, 2012 at 4:45 PM

Dark but still poetic.

Russell Sivey

February 28, 2012 at 2:08 PM

This is really a gloomy poem! I love how you used the vulture to "soar(s) on wind current(s)"! Very powerful line! And especially powerful is your juxtaposition! I love your whole poem! Great Work!!