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this was supposed to be a letter to myself in twenty years 

hello darling
you are walking better
great job losing the weight
healthier now than expected

eating better
dressing with more enthusiasm
your gardens look fabulous
your house is cleaner

of course you are still painting
I see less messes now
I am impressed with your progress
Proud of you, for sure!

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