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Gray Wolf Silently Waits For the Raven

It's been months I've spent by myself lonely
in this cold, wet cave without your presence. 
Countless times I've spoken to you only 
to find myself in a fleeting pleasance.

I rest in hope you'll fly back near the ridge.
In my weakness, the thought of you in flight,
with your sleek, midnight blue eyes, and plumage,
gives me comfort through the chill, haggard night.

Your guidance is what I remember most.
I have lived so long in the wilderness.
My mottled gray coat has lengthen almost
white in color for the winter chillness.

You fear me not with my alien charm.
I vowed to keep you safe from any harm.

11/4/2017

Poetry Contest: 'Best Sonnet 
Sponsored by: Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 4:36 PM
Belated congrats on your win with this beautiful sonnet, Eve.
Ashley Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 6:24 PM
I remember well this enchanting sonnet, Eve. Congratulations for your wonderful win with this beautiful write. ~Susan
Scars Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 10:53 AM
great poem to fir the picture, loved it, congrats sweet Eve ;)-luloo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 10:26 PM
Congratulations, Eve on your win.
Hamilton Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Thanks Eve for your entry and congrats on a fine placement!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 7:07 PM
Congratulations on your win with this charming sonnet Eve! : )
Haight Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:22 PM
Back again, Eve, to congratulate your on another win for this lovely Sonnet! Hugs, Sandra
Ashley Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Eve, I was a fan of this write when I first read it and now I return to offer my congratulations on your fine contest win with this magnificent write.
May Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 8:13 AM
Congrats on your win Eve
Scars Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 6:34 AM
I love wolves! Great poem sweet Eve :) thank you and congrats :)
One Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 6:11 AM
How did I miss this? What an excellent sonnet..
Delaney Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 8:19 AM
Love knows no boundaries. Congratulations on your fine win. SuZ
Inman Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 2:38 AM
A lovely write Eve, but talk about a disparate pair.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 6:59 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your win Eve :) xomo!
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 6:31 PM
an absolutely beautiful sonnet Eve congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Such a lovely Sonnet, Eve, that reflects this mysterious bond. Congratulations on your First Place win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Gentile Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Congratulations, EVE!!!
Wigley Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 6:09 AM
This write will haunt me, Eve. Love it. Congrats and thanks for entering. Viv x
Davey Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 5:21 AM
A sad story of the trials any couple go through being apart, congratulations
Nusker Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 12:47 AM
Splendid Sonnet, Dear Eve. Congratulations!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 11:25 PM
Congratulations, Eve on your great win.
S     Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 1:06 PM
This is a beautiful, sad sonnet Eve. Perfectly spun tale of an unlikely love and friendship. Best of luck in the contest!! Best, Judy
May Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 11:19 PM
A beautiful sonnet Eve...I enjoyed the read
Gondolf Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Very nicely done, Eve. Enjoyed reading this. Best of luck in the contest. John
Sands Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 6:10 AM
This is so nice Eve. I enjoyed reading this today. Well done. Good luck in the contest :)
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