Gray Mellow Morn

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Image result for pictures of a gray cloudy late summer day 'Tis a gray day not only in the weather but in the mood because of another school shooting. Than-Bauk, another version. Using the same letter to start the word instead of rhyming.

Overcast morn Gray skies mingle Life mellows, rain

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Marugu Mo

Date: 9/11/2024 7:14:00 AM

I have never understood the psychology of school shootings. In my country we have had school fires(quite scary). I enjoyed reading this fine piece

Marugu Mo
Date: 9/11/2024 9:56:00 AM

wow. the fires in our schools have been tragic. sad when young lives are lost so senselessly

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/11/2024 9:24:00 AM

I am sure, Marugu, that someone somewhere in America has started a fire in a school, but I can't remember that happening. I am sure that at some point someone has burned one down or tried. What young males and some females can't think of to do usually can't be done. LOL..I know some have pulled the fire alarms so they would not have to do schoolwork for a few hours or something else but these school shooting are so horrible. I can't understand what they are trying to prove. Thanks for visiting. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/6/2024 8:47:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your write. "Good Luck" Have a Blessed day writing away..............

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/6/2024 9:20:00 AM

Thanks Paula. Your visits are encouraging. Sara K