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the mirror don't lie long strands sway as I brush them tinsel gray shines bright

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Date: 5/10/2024 5:29:00 AM
sometimes i think strangely, that gray hair come when thinking too much, however this is a beautiful haiku indeed,
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Karen Croft
Date: 5/10/2024 8:11:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/9/2024 10:44:00 AM
Saying much in 3 lines. You are seeing aging, yet your long hair sounds beautiful…they sway (perhaps as they always did…seeing a part of your youth still…their is joy in the final line…tinsel gray, like Christmas….a healthful shine. Sounds like your aging like fine wine. Hugs ~ Kim
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Karen Croft
Date: 5/9/2024 2:57:00 PM
Indeed! Thanks for reading.

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